heh, yay! its a happy ending at least! well, that really was weird, but i enjoyed it! keep up with writing!

gah, thats really weird! well, ill be waitn for the next chapie! keep it up!

Hurry up and review! this is a great story but... its taken you a really long time to update. so hurry.

Swet! This is a really cool story; I'm really enjoying it, please update soon!

that was good

can't wait for the update!

geez man, Ayanna's very Fatal Attraction-ish! i can't believe she told Merrill to shut up..that's craziness! more more more! :)

Whoa... I don't like that chick, heehee. And two chaps so soon! :) Please go on!

It's good; I like the mysterious air you created. One thing though: I'm not entirely sure, but was Isabelle the dog in the film? Coz if so I do recall her being killed when they left her outside. Dunno if that's right, just you said it was the dog he'd grown up with. Soz if I'm wrong, saw it a long time ago and am just curious. Great though. Read both chapters and I like the ending to the 2nd one! Write more!

Great story! I just saw The Village and it as an amazing movie. Another masterpiece by Night

Write more!

Good story! Keep updating. I saw The Village a

few days ago. It was pretty good, I thought Signs

was better though. The Village isn't as scary as the commercials make it out to be, it really isn't scary at all.

oh, i see. you thought morgan was 9 in the movie when in fact it states in the script that he's 10; they're 6 years apart. no offense taken, though! i should have specified.

please continue with this! brainwashed!graham makes for a good story. and have fun on vacation! the script is here, btw, in case you were interested: http:/w.weeklyscript.com/Signs.txt

i like this! it seems a bit like graham hasn;t talked to him at all during the year, which i find hard to believe, but other than that it's a good job. i'd like to see this continued! two other random comments: bo was 4 in the movie, and i love the way you decribe merrill. hehee. ;)

Good start so far! Are there going to be any aliens in later chapters? Continue soon!