I have a suggestion for you. Instead of posting individual parts, put the second part as the next chapter.

That was rather good, but I don't think Abbess Germaine would talk to the dibbuns as if they were brothers and sisters of redwall. She had used some words that creatures of their seasons would not likely comprehend. Other than that great! I can't wait to read the next one.

The Littlest Dibbun

Wow, 16 reviews for one chapter! It's good, I liked it. It seemed kind of strange for Abbess Germaine to just say, "I'm sorry, but the Abbey is under attack," but it works. Gets right to the point. I like those stories, where you don't have to read four chapters for something to happen. Very good!

Yay! Old goodness...

Oh, Columbine, all you adults live in the abbey too. What is this, are you admitting to be babes also? Hmmm? Are you?

Are you going to finish? Please?

*pokes author* Gonff's son is callet Gonfflet

Cute

hi. i like the story i am glad a person finnlay went back and told us about baby gonff.one this though the abbess whould not tell the babes what is going on she whould make up something.by the way he was not called gonff the baby was call gonflet if you red the book lengend of luke ok bye.

oooohhh mannnn

Go Dibbuns! Go Dibbuns! Go Dibbuns!

That was really good. I can't wait to read the next one one thin though shouldn't there be more dibbuns though? P.s. sorr for allm the spelling mistakes i'm typing as fast as i canto read the next one. I hate cliffhangers!

Twasn't bad, hope it gets better.

Great writing! I've got to go read the second part.

So far so good. Very good writing

good cant wait toeasd the last of it