Wow! What a great summary. You really have the Monk style down. You could be a writer for the show with an original case like that!

Suspense! What a neat way to end a chapter! I have to to see what happens now! I honestly have never seen this story on before, but I'm glad I have now...

I like Monk's mini-summation of the weapon used, and how to solve the crime... A different angle taken that still makes Monk the best detective ever!

Stot is using correct police procedure! I'm glad! And Michelle sure is hot-headed here, so you have captured her aggressive personality from the show. That's a very good thing, because when someone appears only once, it's hard to nail down their personality and you HAVE! :)

What is going to happen here? Personally, I liked Monica Waters a lot better than Michelle, but maybe you can convince me she's not a jerk... I guess I may not have given her much of a chance when I saw her on the show... This I must ponder, as well as the new case! On I go!

great story!
decent mystery; m/m, d/s, but not too shippy; they're all in character...write another!
=D

haha THANK YOU for not making that too un-monkish. some people go too far but that was perfect. great story! hope to read more of yours!

hahaha i luv the ending..another great one!

YAY!! WRITE THE SUMMATION LOLOL

Well, I know nothing about San Francisco restaurants, so I just had a generic one in mind.

oo this is looking good!! For some reason, I can't get the image of them all being in the restaurant, Pegasus. LOL. but I'm really sure it's not in Pegasus. Write more soon!! I've started another Monk fic, but I'm banned off ff.net for a week because of a fanfic challenge i posted...so, go to my profile and click the link that goes to my site if u want to read it. When u get there, go to Stories and Linkage and click Mr. Monk and the Toddler. I've only posted the murder so far, but im almost done with chapter 2!! awesome story, my friend! keep it up!

keep on writin it i luvvit! ive got 2 monk fics i haven't worked on in ages but they're still good!! i'm working on a new one now...but im suspended from posting for a week..so i'll post it as soon as my ban comes off!!

Great story so far!!