I cried it was so sweet! You did a good Job, and I am glad the main characters were Hiei and Yukina, they are my favorites.

aw love it. it sweet and it made me cry!

IT'S SO SWEET CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE SWEET! Funny too in various parts, WONDERFUL LOVELY, PWETTY PWEASE MWAKE TIT A TWWOO ST-HOT, PWETTY PWEASE -PUPPY DOG EYES-

*.* STARRY EYED

FROM A 11 YEAR OLD GAL...

This is really good! Its sweet, and the end is funny. I loveses it! *adds to faves* This should be a two-shot!

i love it keep writing

definetly add another chapter with him as a uncle with kuwabara's input too, that would be funny. love the story by the way

that was so awesome luved it! plz plz make it a twoshot or maybe sumthan about hiei becoming an uncle on yukina's next birthday! _

Aw man it's so cute and beautiful don't ask me what was wrong with me when i first read it and didn't review

but i m now so don't be mad.

Keep Writing

Riku

This is an awesome and sweet story! you have really done a great job. Please make another story like this,please!

hey, that was a f* awesome story! great work on the whole hiei and yukina thingy. since you did such a good job, HAVE A F* COOKIE!

bai-bai, gothic goddess

I don't care about Hiei's past or if he's a forbidden child , but what do I get.

The last part was funny

YAY! What an awesome Hiei and Yukina fic! I love finding cute stories like this, and yours is spectacular! You blended everything very well while keeping it light, and you kept Hiei in character too, which is freakin' hard to do. lol I commend you and do continue with your work!

LOL, i thouht the ending was hilarious! well, its better than "Hn" or "keh" ! lol, love it u should keep going! i think i would be hilarious to have an'uncle Hiei' around! laterz

Luckily humans did not go into heat...

HAHAHAHAHA! I laughed out loud at that one. Long and loud.

He decided to use a phrase he'd never used before, "Crap."

HAHAHA! More funniness.

I LOVE this! It's so great! I love it and now I wanna draw Yukina sleeping on Hiei. I can just picture it. Thanks for the inspiration and thanks for the wonderful story! _

That was cute. I liked it...well except for the fact that Hiei and Yukina are MUCH younger! But I can overlook that...It was good.