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| Jyoura-Crip 2004-11-10 ch 8, anon. | abuseSicc fic cuz and ur rite mimiato and jyoumi blows dicc for lunch hahah still that Koumi-loc fan but most ppl are hatin and shit! |
| Jyoura-Crip 2004-11-10 ch 8, anon. | abuseSicc fic cuz and ur rite mimiato and jyoumi blows dicc for lunch hahah still that Koumi-loc fan but most ppl are hatin and shit! |
| Jyoura-Crip 2004-11-10 ch 8, anon. | abuseSicc fic cuz and ur rite mimiato and jyoumi blows dicc for lunch hahah still that Koumi-loc fan but most ppl are hatin and shit! |
| Jyoura-Crip 2004-11-10 ch 8, anon. | abuseSicc fic cuz and ur rite mimiato and jyoumi blows dicc for lunch hahah still that Koumi-loc fan but most ppl are hatin and shit! |
| she's-writing-that 2004-09-04 ch 3,  | abuseHey, I like it. Not enough sokerus out there. :) |
| Misa-chan 2004-08-19 ch 2, | abuseOkay, well, I was kind of lost, just due to my lack-of-knowledge on the subject, and 'cause I haven't read your other fics, but the story itself looks good! ^__^ One piece of constructive criticism: it's pretty confusing to put thoughts AND spoken words in quotes. Even if you DO always specify whether they're thinking or speaking, I got mixed up a lot. Find some way to distinguish the two a bit more, maybe. But nice job. First time writing fluff... whoo! Trying new things! You haven't gotten to the uber-fluff yet I guess, but I like it so far, and I expect that to be just as good. ^_^ |
| Soradanomi 2004-08-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was good. I think I'll go read the rest of Fallen Devimon's saga now! |