This is still, and always will be, one of my favorite stories of all time. I'm serious. Although the plot is completely out of my comfort zones, the characters are true to canon and the writing is beautiful. I will continue to re-read and re-read this story for inspiration on my own writings. I just thought you would like to know!

So far I am being very entertained by this, and I can't wait to read more. I'm looking forward to the update you've promised!

That was great. Update soon.

Great.

Great.

I came across this on the favorites list of a profile from another story I enjoyed recently (it tends to be how I find a lot of my fanfic reading material) and greatly enjoyed it. I was a bit disappointed that it wasn't updated anytime recently but I hope the story will eventually be finished. :) Keep up the good work.

You have a great storyline. I hope don't quit it.

This is just so, so good! It's fantastically written. Erica's a really well-inspired addition to the story and she provides the pivot that some of the points to the story need. Tiffany as well. I'm pleased the way she turned out, she had a shock, but adapted well after she had enough infrmation to do so. It'll be good for both James and Harry to be together again, and whoever said it was right, it will be easier for Harry to learn from his father...I don't suppose that an Animagus form is too much to hope for with as much as they have to do at this point? Please keep writing, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I was right! yay!

I just figured it out. I thought Gryffin was harry, but he is james!

This looks really good!!

Great story, but I wouldn't have started to read it had I realized that you don't update. *sigh*

First, I've read this all today, and I have to say that I do like the story. I'm disappointed that it's been over 16 months without an update. Also looking at this you kind of jumped the gun and added alot of HBP stuff in here, minus the death of Dumbledore. You stated that this will be on-going, and I think that you have alot to make up for in this story. First off, Harry has no love life. James has a pseudo-love life but is complicated. It appears that you're setting up canon ships but at the same time giving James the impression that Harry will follow suite and go for the brainy bird in Hermione. There's been no James' mention of Ginny resembling Harry's mom, so that seems to be a dead avenue.

I'm a firm shipper in these fan fictions. I believe that it has a place and JKR missed the ship when she did what she did romantically in not having it be the forefront for the latter stories.

I think that you need to start writing again. I've added this to my favorite stories list and story alerts. So I hope and expect for you to update the story shortly. If you're having block issues, seek me out on Yahoo IM as GeovanniLuciano.

Geovanni Luciano

a great story that is! And, although you said you had trouble writing the action parts, I can assure you it's not noticeable when you read it!
I especially loved the way you make your characters appear so alive - the ones we know already just like the ones you have invented!
I hope you'll continue and finish this story eventually. Good luck with it!

oh i hated and loved the end to that ch. My dad just died a few months ago and i would give anything to get him back and the whole emotinal rolercoaster actually made my shed a few tears... I feel like a crybaby, sorry I tend to ramble;)
Good chapter.