I think this is possibly the most beatuiful piece of fanfiction I have ever read. You did such an amazing job with this. The way you describe everything is incredible, and the metaphors.. man!

And the ending was absolutely the best park. So perfectly worded. Just, absolutrly perfect.

I am beyond in love with this piece. And normally I don't get such an emotional reaction to a story where it doesn't end with them together...

Omg. i luv that song!
i saw 'Girl From Mars" and i HAD to read this fic! damn straight! :) lol
i really liked it, especially how it was a fic about luke when he was with Nicole, coz we always wonder about that;)

maybe a sequel? or update? just suggestions

:D

I just discovered this... it was so beautiful, I really enjoyed reading it.

Guh! Just Guh! This is absolutely fantastic! Love your descriptions, love your Luke, love his thoughts, the little bit of dialogue I could HEAR him say just GUH! Fantastic fic! Great work!
I think my fav part is the bit where he says it's like she's from a sunset! Gorgeous bit of writing there!

I just realized that I've never reviewed this, which is sort of odd to me, considering how much I love thise piece.

I love fics that are heavy on character exploration, and this is probably one of the best Luke ones I've read out there. Emotional, in-character, and amazing uses of metaphors. Yay.

Aw... heartbreakingly bittersweet. You know what I mean. This is great!

*smiles* Now Girl From Mars will always be a JJ song, and never again a Lit song for me. I'll blame it on you.

I loved it, especially because I've always loved the TASP dream, and always thought people didn't pay it the deserved attention, and now you have and me is happy.

"and she's never going to leave a trail of disaster behind her, crashing through the atmosphere and gouging a crater in other people's lives that they won't ever be able to fill."

This was really gorgeous. It's somehow a darker view to Lorelai, but it makes so much sense. She does scream disaster, that girl.

Loved it.

Deh

Wonderful. I love stories that get inside Luke's head, and this one does it beautifully. Definitely one of my favorite ficathon stories!

Wow, Lula, what a wonderful piece. I love Luke as a character--I only wish ASP would get into his head half as well as you have! Thank you so much for sharing this--the imagery was fantastic and comparing and contrasting all of Luke's "women" gave such a clear picture of how Luke sees each of them and has adapted to each of them in his life. Can't wait to see what your next piece brings!

Well, you already know how much I adore this thing. Big thanks for not getting mad at me when I wasn't originally in love with it; it's better now, it's beautiful now, I heart you/this so completely.

I totally need to think of news sayings.

You're lulalicious, love. (And yes, check out the ficathon!)

Lula, you've done it again. All this is just beautiful, lyrical, and yet the voice is still somehow Luke's. The way you've put the women in his life into perspective, compared and contrasted them, is perfect. Love it.

very sad, but so wonderful. love this piece

Amazing. You are an incredible author. Keep up all the great work.

as usual...you're style and flair are well...beautiful...I struggled so long with his dream and still marrying Nicole like that...but the TwoP fanficathon really gave me a couple wonderful stories which gave me some Luke perspective on why he tried to move on...not his fault...she told him to go

That was a really good thought piece for Luke. I like how you descibed him and rachel in it, and his want to not think about lorelai, but knowing that thats all that he can think about. Great piece!