But he was sure he wouldn't lose Fuji though; not to time, not to selfish ambitions, not to solitude and bitterness. They had one last common dream, which was tennis, and in the darkness behind his closed eyelids, he could see it, stark and clear, bright against his memories.

Oh, /this line/ got to me. Your writing is so smooth, and doesn't make me cringe with cliches or other stupid things like that.

Beautiful.

Man, this fic is good.

You have strange and vague colours, foreign and so utterly WHEE that I'm reduced to a slash flag-bearer. ::TezuFuji:: vague-ness rocks. This is fic is a winner.

YAY for you.
YAY for TezuFuji.

I especially liked:

"I have no more dreams left to hold onto."

"I'll give you mine."

"I don't want to live in another person's dreams."

"Then maybe we can share it."

You read the first two, and they're so melodramatic and
incongrous wit the gray-blue-purple-ness of the fic, and then he next to lines come and wreck expectations. of a sick, reader, such as me. And I'm not a masochist, no, wanting to read lit which makes me [suffer], but tjis writiting is good. Tangy, like.

♥ Oh~ Excellent writing style, your Tezuka characterization is lovely~ As well as your Fuji and Ryoma characterization~ And the TezuFuji hints just make me go *♥♥♥&*

i luv this. very good. and believe me, funny as it sounds, but i found some trivial similarities w/ my on-going series (the france setting and tezuka meeting echizen and the fuji!talk). but i guess that's just the way real fans work (and the fact that they often think alike when it comes to their fave pairings /smiles/), and i hope you're okay w/ it cuz i swear, this was the first time i read your fic. and like i said, i like it. you did great. :)

I really like your writing style. ^^ The soft, underlying hints at a relationship, but not openly being all raburabu~ keeps the brain running, and forces readers to reread your words to squeeze more meaning out of them. IMO, ZukaFuji is like this~ faint, but once the both of them figures out what is needed exactly, they'll get there. Although I think that Tezuka and Fuji are actually very similar to each other... thus they can be really happy together, or they'll break up very easy too. >< But enough of this, great fic, great writing. Added you to my favourite authors list~ keep the good work up!

is there any more? I would like to see the German Fuji look alike to meet Fuji.

Enjoyed this tremendously. Sort of ZukaFuji, yes, but not quite, and a nice take on how different it might be. :) Excellent, really.

oh mind... i like this story. is this a one-shot?but it's great. but i got a qn, u said that this fic is a mixture of anime and manga, and from the anime u took the part where tezuka left japan. u said the rest of the story follow the manga. u finished reading the manga? tezuka did not make it in time for the Nations and fuji gave tennis up? is these all real pls reply me and tell me...can u? i am a new fan of this manga and i bought the manga till Vol 21 only. reply soon to me if u can. i must tell u i like this story no matter how it continues ,it gave me a mystery feelign and it felt great. keep up the good work. haha long review?? juz keep writing