Good job! A bit too dramatic in some places, but overall great writing and plot. Keep it up!

please sent me a link if u write a sequel please!

WOW! Your story kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time! I'm so thrilled that they finally realized that they had to be together. You did a nice job with the angst...it was very moving. And I especially loved your character, James II. He was so cute..like a mini Will! Again, thanks for writing this truly awesome story! :D

OMG, that was SUCH a cute story! Loved it!!

aw, at least his parting words were true to character and didnt make him out to be a villiam

"Elizabeth, dear, you forgot you robe, I'm sure that Mr. Turner's embrace is warm, but not warm enough on a night like this." damn...nice lines. though man, your gonig to kill norrington off? poor guy.

aw, poor norrington-esp that he overheard that he was the evil govenor. poor guy, hes noce afterall.

Oh... read that all in one go, very exciting! Thanks for reviewing my story btw!

Loved this one! Fantastic!

Well, you should write another one... Draco/Hermione maybe?

Cheers,
.:~*The Coldness of Love*~:.

Haha I luved it! That was so0o0o0o good!! jklolmo
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xsummerbabyx (Kaitlin)

WOW! That was an amazing story! Really! I couldnt stay away from it...i would stop reading and then i would find myself reading it again. I couldn't get enough of it. Great Job!

Dude. There HAS to be a sequel! I love your writing style, it's very unique. PLEASE write more stories like this!

What?! NO! Will can't just get up and leave... Anyway, what does this bit mean, '...the morning after they had unknowingly conceived a child...' it's kinda confusing.

I love this story (*tears*) it was so perfect from start to finish, and the title is the best part, you're wonderful!

Usually I'm not fond of Will/Elizabeth stories, but this one made me change my mind! It's wonderfully written adn very captivating! By all means, continue please!

I really loved your story it was great.
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