creepy realism

Surprisingly, I enjoy the story. I was never the one who reads dark theme stories, or first-character based fics... but this idea kinda attracted me into reading. Eliwood is the character who's least likely to behave like that... or is he? XD

It's a nice Eliwood and Hector friendship fic.

But I have to agree with you, the ending's kinda abrupt. It doesn't have this... complete feeling. But oh wells.

Aw, that's nice. At tleast there's a mostly happy ending and poor Eli didn't really commit suicide. Cause that would SUCK!

Eliwood: Indeed.

Link: ...you're not crazy anymore, r-right?

Eliwood: I never was, really. I was just in-character corresponding to the story.

Link: Um... okay... Let's hope NN1 doesn't read anymore psychotic fics...

XD Very well done. The story left me in chills. Keep it up!

Nintendo Nut1

O_O Whoa... Um... wow...

Eliwood: Nenenenenenenene...

Link: O_o *pokes eli*

Eliwood: *draws out knife* 8D

Link: O_O WAAH! *FLEE*

Eliwood: *CHASE* 8D

Damn, that's crazy... I'll have to read more!

Nintendo Nut1

I like the ending. Good job!

Excellent

it's good.

Well, the first half of the chapter was pretty good; I liked the scene with Nils. BUT THEN IT WAS SO SUDDEN! I mean, it was a good ending, but there was a little gray line and BOOM! ;_;

Bravo. It's nice to see a character's feelings dissected as far as you took 'im- too bad that it seems like it won't be done for too many others along these lines, though. Although, I can certainly see someone doing this sorta thing to Karel (but I think that that might be too easy when compared to Eliwood here). Congrats. You did a great job, and I certainly can't complain about the direction you took him in. It's all too possible, given the many options that could have taken place instead.

As Lyn commented in the game, "It's better than giving in to despair, I suppose." Of course, he did here- and obviously, this would be a good description of what could have happened if he had. Well done.

ohmygod. it's over? FINALLY.

I dunno, the ending didn't seem that abrupt. I like how Eliwood wasn't magically cured...getting over something like self-abuse is a long, hard proccess and it can take years.

All in all...this wasn't the best thing I ever read, but you had a good concept and you obviously put in a lot of effort. The only part I didn't like was the cutting because I don't believe Eliwood would be into that and I dislike cutting!fic in general, but the idea behind it interested me enough to read anyway.

But I've rambled. Sorry 'bout that.

This... is... a... GREAT FIC! it is bautifully writen! i truly enjoy this fic! Please continue writing Fire Emblem Fics! Ja Ne!

Um, yeah, he should be younger-she's 18, and he's 17, according the the character book. Deep thoughts on Eliwood's part.

Ah, Eliwood is finally beginning to calm down a little, it seems...

Yeah! Eliwood is gaining sanity! I was wondering how much blood he'd lose until he finally stopped. Keep writing!