  Katie 8/26/05 . chapter 1 THIS REVIEW COUNTS FOR ALL THREE PARTS OF THE FRIENDS FOREVER STORY:
I think I'll rate that a...7. It had like, the most miss spelled words in one story I have ever read. And there was grammar problems, and there was like, only ONE paragraph! Didn't you go to school? I mean come on! You're writing like a third grader. I recommend putting paragraphs, and double spaces, and better grammar, puntiuation, and spelling. Work harder, and faster!
TTFN
Katie _ |
 in.the.palm.of.your.hand 9/30/04 . chapter 1Oh no! Please don't let Misty be dead! Please update soon!
Love always
Tamar |
| Mr.Evil 12/9/03 . chapter 1 muhahahaha that is a good way to end a chapter |
| Terri 10/21/03 . chapter 1 YOUR COMPLETELY EVIL! Please update i'm all for misty/ash fanfics and inu/kag and of course Kenshin/Kouru! Thanks email back
Love terri |
| skysong 9/14/02 . chapter 1 DAMN! I *HATE* CLIFFHANGERS! *runs around screaming ' i hate cliffhangers'* byebye!update! |
| the Iron Duke the Deseert Fox 3/28/01 . chapter 1 ID:good story, had a little difficulty reading it. Try dividing it up into paragraphs next time.DF:Wow |
| Sailor Pokemon 10/7/00 . chapter 1 Good cliff hanger! |
| Birdy 5/28/00 . chapter 1 Why did you have to leav it hanging like that? |
| legacy 5/11/00 . chapter 1 Ok, next part? |
| chuchino 4/25/00 . chapter 1 sweeeeeeet! |
| dino 4/24/00 . chapter 1 sweet. nice kissing |
| Phoenix 4/20/00 . chapter 1 luv it! I luv it! i luv all da mushy parts! But whatever you do... :::happy grin turns into a menacing sneer::: DON'T KILL MISTY! |
| pikachusux 4/18/00 . chapter 1 EEEEEEEEEEEEE! How DARE you leave me hanging! You shall be VANQUISHED! BWA-HA-HA-HAAAAA! *is carried away by two men in white coats* |
| Luna 4/18/00 . chapter 1 VERY EVIL! come on more more more! |
| Pikabit 4/18/00 . chapter 1 Uh oh. I don't trust Brock... |
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