Reviews for The Story of Clue

Reviews For: The Story of Clue

ShaneBLAST 2007-11-22 ch 3,	abuseLol. Was this chapter supposed to be a parody?
Trekkie S. Monster 2005-08-04 ch 2,	abuseEw, Mustard/Scarlet? Stop! But it's OK otherwise.
MarineManiac 2005-03-14 ch 6,	abusei want more plz write more
Colonel Mustard 2004-09-12 ch 4,	abuseI suppose given my name it's my perogative to review this piece involving my escapades in the Boddy mansion! The story is building nicely so far, the bathroom scene was quite amusing, hehe. Well Mr Boddy, why have we been summoned here? Do continue!
Clueless-currasow 2004-08-24 ch 3,	abuseThe third chapter is a bit distressing. You switch between third and first person, which makes things quite confusing. Also, I am confused by your grammar in general. I'm sorry to have to sound like an 8th grade english teacher, but it is just too hard to read. Also, you're chapters are extremly short and are not so much suspensful as just plain short. I just hope I see a main idea develop soon.
TheWhitePrincess1 2004-08-22 ch 2,	abuseHehe this is awesome. Did you mean to do that with the directions?? Of course they really don't have any barring on the story if I'm correct...lol Oh well it's just funny the way it turned out. So in answer to your question yes your second chapter came out. Lol C you at school!
Clueless-currasow 2004-08-21 ch 1,	abuseI'm sorry to say that this isn't exactly a great fic. First off, I'm not sure I understood what was going on before the telegram arrived or who Mrs. Brown is (in this particular story). Other than that, it's a nice beginning, I suppose, though pretty short and vague. However, it seems to be taking a while for the rest of the story to arrive, and I am starting to wonder if it ever will. If and when it does, however, I will defintley read it. I am anxious to see where the story will go.
PapercutPerfect 2004-08-03 ch 1,	abuseHey, that was really good. Looking forward to more!

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