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ml101 8/30/10 . chapter 15
You got me hooked so bad! I really wish you'd continue it! Haha! Thanks so much for this fic! It's bloody brilliant!
DeepBlueJoy 3/16/10 . chapter 15
OK... not only do you leave us hangin', you go out on a cliff hanger of a doozy of an ending. Come on, darlin', it's time you got back to work. Finish this! Please...

Blue
DeepBlueJoy 3/15/10 . chapter 12
OK... it's 2010 and you haven't updated since 2005... This is a bad sign for someone whose now completely hooked. I really do hope that I might be lucky, very, very lucky, and you will decide to come back to your calling and UPDATE THE DAMN STORY NOW!

OK, got that out of my system. Now I'll finish the few chapters left and go off into a corner to mope until and unless you decide to change your mind. I really do hope you will. I know real life an d muse get in the way sometimes, but please... have mercy!

Blue

PS: don't put yourself down so much. You've got good story skills and an intelligent, easy to read style. Most of us would do better with editors and betas... most if not all the books you read seem polished because people who make their careers as editors, spend months working on them. Perfection doesn't happen by accident. The bits that can't be 'worked on' or learned - being able to tell a great story well? You've got those down cold. The art, the gift are yours. The craft can be learned, and a good editor is an asset to EVERY writer, even the very best.

RATING: 9/10 Note: I only give 10s to writers who have the gift as well as the professional skills, you're not there yet, but you could be.
Sweetp000433 2/27/09 . chapter 5
This chapter wasn't boring.
Susangel 8/6/07 . chapter 15
WOW!This is one of the(if not the)best Harry Potter/Buffy crossover!

It's amazing!I just love the way you write Faith...and I love the way you are writing the relatinship between Faith and Wesley...Although I would love to read more about Faith and Sirius relationship,I love the fact that she finnaly found the loving and caring father she always wanted...I would also love to read more about Faith and Harry's relationship,I just loved when Harry said that she was familly...(whipes tear)...it would be awesome if they saw each other as siblings,because Harry sees Sirius as a Father...

And I can't wait untill Wesley and Faith start seeing each other so I can watch Sirius reaction when his childhood friend tells him his dating his daughter...lol...

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't stop writing this story(has aparently you have)and update soon...PLEASE
hermione-lily-luna-sirius 3/5/07 . chapter 15
Amazing, amazing story...love the writing and characters; especially like the way you manage to squeeze in so many canon (including Connor and D'Hoffryn)and original characters and yet not fall into the 'oh great, yet -another- character' hole :)

Read on your profile that it's on hiatus, but really, really hope you'll start it up again and please, please don't abandon it as it would be such a pity because it's a great story and you've left it on a really annoying cliffhanger lol.
dragonfuzzy 9/23/06 . chapter 15
hey have you noticed you havent updated this in forever come on im hooked!
slaygal166 5/28/06 . chapter 15
Plz update soon, this story is so great, I can't wait to read more!
azerjaban 1/28/06 . chapter 15
i know what you mean, theres times when I'm on a roll and nothing can stop me from writing like 5 chapters. But then i get this writers block and end up reading other Fanfic just to if anything will pop up.

This is the first time i've read this story so i dont know how it was before but I'm really liking what you've got going. Keep up the good work!
Red Death 12/7/05 . chapter 4
What's an "Animigus"?

Also, a slight error: Katie Bell is only one year above Harry. She's still in school with him in HBP. I'm sure this has been pointed out before.

Also, you have a real probelm with missing punctuation, especially at the ends of dialogue.

Needs some fixin' quickly.
Terra 11/28/05 . chapter 15
well, i have to say i love your story. the part where everyone seems to be related to someone else is a bit odd...but still. *grin*...so anyway, i do wish you would include Angel more in the story. well i'm hoping you will (He, spike and willow-second- are my fav characters). well regardless i would still like your story. so cheers and please please update soon.
Cat 11/13/05 . chapter 15
Loved the story, please let Wes and Faith actually get together soon! Please update!
chunky-01 11/7/05 . chapter 15
ur story is one of the best, update soon!
APS 10/8/05 . chapter 15
grejt story,

keep upp the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.

Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.
BJCKidsX4 9/26/05 . chapter 15
Ugg! I can't believe you stopped like this! I really like your story.
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