|Reviews for Black Scar|
| Dragon Lady9 8/12/05 . chapter 3
After all the crap Hotsuma has been through, if you kill him, I will make you feel pain. - On a lighter note, solid chapter. The only thing you need to work on is layout. Of course, has f*ed up the story editor so much I can't really blame you for a bad layout and paragraph issues. That's partially why I quit writing. o.o Anyway. Yeah. Don't kill Hotsu.
| Dragon Lady 9 8/12/05 . chapter 2
HOLY JIHAD HOW DID I GET SO FAR BEHIND? Eh...well...I'm sorry I'm reviewing this chapter like a year after everyone else did...Things have been hectic, what with my old computer dying.
It's good to see a sequel. And I can see the second chapter is better than the first. -
You have a good idea, man. Once again, if you work hard enough, you could make this fic so good IT MAKES MY EYES BLEED FROM THE SHEER FORCE OF THE AWESOMENESS.
| Jay Are Vee 1/24/05 . chapter 3
Haha, it looks like Harry(SANKO) just barely met Namiko and now he's already imagine her naked.
Well I can tell becuz you wrote this:
Sanko stared at her for a moment. He tried to imagine Namiko's sleek slender body wearing a thong. He then imagined her wearing nothing at all and started to look at her curiously. He stared at her for another moment and tried to imagine her touching him in a very naughty way.
Haha u r so perverted Soul! Or maybe I'm just having inappropriate thoughts about Namiko, hm. Nah, anyways I might not review this alot since I think this fic is dead bit itz your story.
BTW It's 10:30 on a school nite and I still haven't gone to bed. Oh and just in case you're wondering I've been qouting you in my recent reviews because it's alot of fun. I know you were going to point that out sooner or later. Well See ya!
| Jay Are Vee 8/12/04 . chapter 1
Roy! OMFG Roy! You used my idea! You put Harry Potter in there! I salute you! Oh so, um... is Hermione goin' to be in there? Unless you're going to pair off Harry and Namiko... uh, scary.
| Dragon Lady 8/1/04 . chapter 1
Yarr. It'd better get better. -shakes fist- Next chapter is longer. Don't say 'it sucks next will be better'. Well, by now you know what I expect. '