WOW... Really intense

Wow... that was REALLY good. A sort of abrupt ending, but VERY good.

Uhh.. =) ..
Its sad.. But I like it.. It shows the dark side
of the founders. How they treated the poor Salazar..
He didn't deserved that!! He was only following
his desires and thoughts.. you know? .. =(

I'm sorry for the spellings and grammar mistakes..
I'm Spanish.. I don't know how to speak english very well
But I'm learning !! =D

I liked your interpertation of the founders, most peole focus on the whole slythern/grifendor rift. Even though it was real sad I really liked how you showed the founders all being felled because they let their difrences divide them, much like what happens to the Slytherens now, and because of that rift they all fall into the darkness. Poetic and realistic

PS: Glad you changed the origan of the Sorting hat into SLytheren's hat. It's kinda annoying how everything is so Grifendor in the books. Hary the heir..the hat...most of the adults who get screen time unless they're evil...

ARGH! DAMMIT YOU!! OPEN UP THE REVIEW THING!

...o, my pop-up blocker was on O.o

Very cool and very deep. I liked the last part. Wouldnt mind doing that really, except I'm attached to a bungee cord ^_^

it wud be fun!

Good job!

your poetry is so good! shame that all the founders had serious problems O.o bit like me!

Super good, interesting poem. The rythem and rhymes are great. Great job with it.

Odd. I'd never thought of something like this happening to the founders... Anyways, it was wonderful. Sad, but wonderful. ~Jackie~ (J.E.A.R.K.Potter)

It was...interesting. I liked the poem, but the end was a bit cheezy. No, very cheezy. But I liked the rest a lot.

Oh my...wow! So sad...depressing...I like it! It's amazin! How ever did you think it up? I like it very much, I'dlike to see more of your works!

wow... very different... and it hits hard especially the last part about helga... i love it...

~mandalia

Interesting poem. It was good; I liked it. It's way different than anything I've seen before and, even though in the end all of the founders died, you made it work. You did very well on making sure everything rhymed (even though you had to stretch it a little for some.) It's kind of vague at parts; I didn't exactly understand until I read the end that all of them so far had died. But still, very good. ;)

hey!
that was really good, keep writing more harry potter
related stories.
*~* Cheers! *~*
Meranda Radcliffe (lol)

i've read all your posts and much 2 my surprise i've liked them all. but...YOU'RE CRAZY
(and probably have a death wish)