Nice work. I also see Swift Heart's not a girl in this fic.

Oops! Looks like I missed one after all! Your fanfic certainly had me chuckling at some of the routines you described...reminded me of some of the shows my Scout Troop and I put on while camping several years ago. From the way you captured the mood before, during, and afterward, I'd say you've done some of the same type of stuff. Very well done!

*laughs* that was cool

Moonlit Sea

Okay, I thought that the bandits scene was funny. I really like your Regal Heart character, I'd scratch her chin if she really existed! ...If she wouldn't bite me for it.

Nice interlude! Not plot-driven or character-driven like your other stories, but obviously, it wasn't meant to. Enjoyable stuff all arund.

Very Cute!

I'm normally not a fan of April Fools or anything that goes with it.. but this story is cute! :) And funny.. :)

-TakeCareBear