The Sarah/Karl storyline was my favorite of the movie, and this fic captured it perfectly. So sad. Thank you.

Aw, poignant (:

that's beautiful, enuf said. well done

very, very beautiful!

This is great!

what a nice story. thanks, i think we really needed it! thanks, deni :)

Beautiful description. You've captured the moment very well.

Aw, that was lovely. I absolutely adore this movie and this particular storyline is so bittersweet and heartwrenching. I think you captured Sarah really well -- her constant worrying, even though she knew she shouldn't be, was spot-on. Lovely, lovely description of the moment and what must have been going through her mind.

Absolutely beautiful. :-)