THAT'S WAS AWESOME!

that was the sweatest and saddest poem i have every read!

ah so sad... yet so worth the read *sniffs back a tear or two*

that was so good!excellent!it's also very sad, i loved it!

awwwwwwww...*sniffle* c'est triste (is that right? i'm a little rusty with my french...)

sniff::that was a very sad story..i hope there might be a sequal..sniff sniff

Wow! That was a great story and I would really love it if you made a sequel maybe to where Videl tells Gohan her past and what happened to her mama.

*Crying* Kuma:: *Crying*

WHA! Sad.

It gives me a feeling when i read it, the same one when I read something i re-wrote from elton jhon;

I sat down right there

Wind blowing through my hair

Waiting for a tear to pass

Wished it were to never last

And it seems to me you lived your life

Like a candle in the wind

Never knowing who to cling to

When the rain set in

And I would have liked to have known you

After I was but a kid

Your candle burned out long before

Your legend ever did

As I relized you were gone

And I knew I wasn't wrong

I would've stopped it

If I was ever there

And I know if I was there

Wouldn't muster but a stare

My action's would take place

In everybody else's face

And it seems to me you lived your life

Like a candle in the wind

Never knowing who to cling to

When the rain set in

And I would have liked to have known you

After I was but a kid

Your candle burned out long before

Your legend ever did

And if I was ever wrong

My sadness would be gone

I'd stay the way I should

My mood would stay just 'good'

I could say you're always there

You'd just ruffle my hair

Say "Everything's alright"

With bravery and might

And I know it would be true

If I still knew you

And it seems to me you lived your life

Like a candle in the wind

Never knowing who to cling to

When the rain set in

And I would have liked to have known you

After I was but a kid

Your candle burned out long before

Your legend ever did

You live in me, I see

For others hard beliving you survived in me

But your candle burned out long before

Your legend ever did

This is just good, no it's great! i really had to swallow at the end. Really sad. Really good written

*sniff* sweet is this gohan to videl or pan it sounds more like pan

sad and beautiful. I was almost crying after reading it. It was so good.

OOOOOOOOOO...KKKKKKKKK...AAAAAA...YYYYYYYYY...THAT WAS INTERESTING!AlwaysHoney

(not signed on as cute_honey) THAT WAS SO BUTIFAL! ::Cries:: ::sniffl:: i need more sunkist..

It was beautiful...I loved it