That was beautiful!

Bit mushy for Goten but I;'m sure you wanted it that way!

it's so sweet!

-o

keep up the work

Awe... no matter how much I write I still am a sucker for Bra/Goten. That was so beautiful.

WOW! OMG im speechless, hold on let me catch my breath. Ok im ready, u r an awesome writer u have lots of talent as a poet and a dbz fic writer! UR AWESOME! i adore u and ur writing even though i dont know u! Im gonna tell my friends to read this poems! I JUST LOVED IT IT'S AWESOME! Doesnt look like im speechless anymore does it? Well anyways awesome fic and plz write! otay bye je ne

OMG THAT WAS SOOOO *sniff* GOOODDDDD! i love goten/bra! But it's not impossible! LOVE WILL FIND A WAY! G/B FOREVA!

Hey, this was really sweet :)

Pulchritudinous! & A for the word usage, it rhymes well too.