Lol I would've expected a more enthusiatic response outta pan about the director- shed be the type to say "alright! Now the worlds gonna know how strong pan son is!'
Pans kinda dull n depressing here *sorry im not logged it.. Im on my fone*
Of couse ur story can't be bad.. Coz im totally gonna keep reading!!

is there still a chance that you will come with new chapters for this story? cause i really love reading it :)

eek! UPDATE PLEASE! YOU LEFT ME HANGING! THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!

IT was great but you need to create a new chapter I love the story so please update it was good thanks

Wow, and here I thought I was the only one who had boys dress up as girls. One of the boys that go to my school wore a skirt for spirit week once but the teachers made him take it off. Anyways, I like your fanfic so far. I haven't finished reading it yet but I think this is a wonderful idea. Keep up the great work!

another wonderful chapter of my favorite DBZ fan fiction

I love this story. It's sexy. XD And funny too. Right more, chicklet.

lol loving the story update soon so i can read more...please!

borning

Oh awesome!! Haha! Update soon!

That was so funny!
"Goku began making grunting noises and began screaming very loudly, only to Pan, it sounded like a very enraged monkey who was both screaming and trying to sing at the same time. "Ya! Na! Argh!" Goku continued to scream."

Hahahaha!! Hilarious!!

+Hah! Priceless, VEGETA giving 'fatherly' advise!

*squeals* Great story! *squeals* Oops there goes the window. Oh ow now the men in the white coats from the asylum can enter. No hide me! Hide me please *gets down on her knees* I beg you! Hide me!
*hears a knock on the door*
Nalurah:Who is it?
People at the door: It's us the men in the white coats, we've come to get you!
Nalurah: Oh **! Uhm... I'm not here right now, I'm being held hostage by the wicked witch of the west. Only I don't know where she is. Here witchy witchy witchy, come here, I have cookies.
Men in white coats: Ok we'll come back when you've found the witch and freed yourself *the men go away*
Nalurah:*squeals and does an insane victory dance* Yay! I've done it! They're gone. Now there was something else I had to do...
Uhm... What was it again...
Oh yeah I know! I had to tell you something!
GREAT STORY AND UPDATE SOON OR I'LL SEND THE MEN IN WHITE COATS AFTER YOU! ;)

I was so happy when I saw that you had updated! YAY! I was so excited when Trunks and Pan were on the roof, feelings being admitted, all was right with world, and then that damn Seiko showed up. He's really getting annoying. ANd the thing with Angelina, priceless, she deserved it! Great chapter, can't wait to read more. Peace out my friend. See ya!

So,
update would be nice.

But I guess I won't be lucky there. Ah well.
Just as it was starting to get interesting. ^-O