*squeals* Great story! *squeals* Oops there goes the window. Oh ow now the men in the white coats from the asylum can enter. No hide me! Hide me please *gets down on her knees* I beg you! Hide me!

*hears a knock on the door*

Nalurah:Who is it?

People at the door: It's us the men in the white coats, we've come to get you!

Nalurah: Oh shit! Uhm... I'm not here right now, I'm being held hostage by the wicked witch of the west. Only I don't know where she is. Here witchy witchy witchy, come here, I have cookies.

Men in white coats: Ok we'll come back when you've found the witch and freed yourself *the men go away*

Nalurah:*squeals and does an insane victory dance* Yay! I've done it! They're gone. Now there was something else I had to do...

Uhm... What was it again...

Oh yeah I know! I had to tell you something!

GREAT STORY AND UPDATE SOON OR I'LL SEND THE MEN IN WHITE COATS AFTER YOU! ;)

I was so happy when I saw that you had updated! YAY! I was so excited when Trunks and Pan were on the roof, feelings being admitted, all was right with world, and then that damn Seiko showed up. He's really getting annoying. ANd the thing with Angelina, priceless, she deserved it! Great chapter, can't wait to read more. Peace out my friend. See ya!

So,

update would be nice.

But I guess I won't be lucky there. Ah well.

Just as it was starting to get interesting. -O

Great story

keep on writing

good luck,

Nalurah

More, More, We want more. I love this story so much...

update update update

Hey the story is getting good I like it alot BUT COME ON WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER COMEING OUT gr lol so yah doing good like it

That was a good chapter! Poor Goten. I liked the line, "Goten shook his head as he flipped the channel on the television once again, "Your constant escapades and mom's compulsion of worrying are really getting decrepit." Yep...update soon please!

Too short! Update soon.

Wow! Great job. My school does that senior auction too...((for info on school look at my info page)). This is awsome! Lizardball...cheesy but I like it!

Dear DBZAngelX,

Whoa... A cliffhanger... Gosh, I hate those things when other people include them in their stories. *LoL* No offense, I really enjoy reading your stories - but I just don't like cliffhangers, except for when I incorporate them into my own stories because then I know what's going to happen. But that's not the point, the point is this: You are a beyond wonderful author. I just can't find words coherent enough to even begin to describe how great of one you are. It would sound something like this: "Uh... I.. Uh... Um... Hm... Uh..." No one wants to hear that... *LoL* But you are truly a great one, and I really love this story. I can't wait until you update though, the suspense is killing me. *LoL* But great things come when time is put into them... (I hate that saying... *LoL* Sometimes when you slap something together in an instant, it looks good - at least to me it does. *LoL*) But I really can't complain because you're great at updating; I finally updated mine after ... like a month. *LoL* Anyway, that's not the point either. I apologize for not reviewing for a couple of chapters, but I really enjoy this story. Once again, you're an awesome writer - keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more of your story, so please update soon. Take care and, as always, God Bless!

Oh man! O, you better hurry up w/the next chapter! That cliffy is gonna irritate me beyond reason! This story is awesome, and it's just getting more and more exciting! Hurry, pplleeaassee? Keep up the good work!

YAY! You updated! Poor Goten, I hope he can get over his depressed mood, though it does seem to make him a lot smarter. I loved your chater, and can't wait to read more of your story. See ya!

Dear DBZAngelX,

Hiya! Well, I apologize for not reviewing sooner... I have no idea why though, you're a great author. I love this story, you have such creative ideas. Literally, I'm taken away by your story. You have such a talent for writing, I hope you never waste that, or throw it out rather. You put my stories to shame. I envy you... (But in the good way. *LoL*) You put so much information in one little chapter, it's unpredictable what will happen next! I love these types of stories. You're so hard-core, I love your writing skills. Well...more to the actual story review... *LoL* Will Trunks ever get the chance to tell Pan? *LoL* Goten is so random... I love him. I feel bad for him though, that's so sad. Angelina, that...that...that... Well, I don't really have a word. And since I don't cuss, that eliminates other possible words... *LoL* She's a...you know. *LoL* I just hope she gets revenge soon, maybe from Pan? Or maybe she'll flock all over Trunks and he'll do something. Oh, nevermind; Goten will take offense. Don't want that type of conflict... I know this is extremely late (But this review is highly late anyway), but Eraser's bald! *LoL* Oh My Goodness! That's so funny! And they tease him... It's so comical! *LoL* You're a hard-core author...mixing romance with humor, general, and a whole mess-load of other things...including suspense. *LoL* A month until your next update...that's really sad. I can't wait though! *LoL* You're a great author, I love the way you write. By the way, I love your screen name thingy. It's really unique, and really pretty at that. But I should let you go... Take care and, as always, God Bless you!

P.S. If you don't review before then, Happy 4th of July! I hope you have a great one, but a safe one at that. (Don't want anything to catch fire or blow up...) Update Soon Please! Bye.

-Brittany

Poor Goten...well, actually, it's his fault for dating her in the first place. Nevermind. Hooray for cross-dressing! No, I'm kidding, but Trunks in girls' clothes is funny. Took me a while to review, but update soon!