dude, it so totally could've been better. I'm not tryin' to say your not, like, a bad writer. It's just that you have some improving. But besides the negativity, your story is original and fun. Keep it up.

Great job on this story. I was throroughly entertained throughout the whole plot. Very nicely done.

Pardon? Can you list the real names of those again? Like I think the following are:

Cyrielle: Mana
Svrion: Mahaado/Mahado
Aundren: ?
Hufanse: ?
And the rest: ?

Maybe you can just drop by any of my stories and tell me...don't email. It doesn't work at the moment.

-Yachtzee, 9/8/05- a.k.a rayearth-luvr

Nice poetry, bery nice indeed. Now, to the point. It keeps saying "Cy this" and "Cy that". Considering the fact that she is the only female in the room, you might want to used the pronouns "she" or "her".

Anyhow, I figure that you must know what you're doing, so I'll just sit back and read on to see how you progress. You probably won't find any reviews for the next four or five chapters, unless I'm extremely displeased.

-Yachtzee- a.k.a. "rayearth-luvr"

Its over. So sad. It was a good ending. I liked it.

~KatrinaKaiba~

It's been quite a while since I read a story with such a thoroughly satisfying ending. All the angsty things I was afraid were going to happen, didn't! So it was a completely joyous and very happy ending. Hufanse saved Faiya, Svrion and Cy are a couple, Celton was reunited with his beloved Renalyn (even if he didn't remember that she didn't have a brother - men can be so dense about details at times!), and even Aundren got a girl. (Being in love seems to have made Clarissa much less critical of Cy, so it's all to the good).
You created a fascinating world for the duel monsters to live in, and I enjoyed every minute of reading about it. It was so engrossing with so many fun characters, that I didn't even miss Yugi and the gang.
Very well done!

Heya! Sorry I hadn't reviewed in a while...but I did read every chapter of your story!^^

Such a swee~t ending! All of the couples are cute, too! Especially Cy and Svrion...so adorable...

Then, your fic was going quite fast, but you finished it in a year! That's something! The humor on the last part was a bit...randomly put though. Anyway, congrats and I'm looking forward to your Curse of Blue-eyes story! XD

Aww one more...its so sad but i guess it has to be that way. I was looking forward to a sequel. So one more chapter, can't wait.

~KatrinaKaiba~

Have Fun. I'll be waiting.

~KatrinaKaiba~

Awsome update. Its atually kind of funny since it is now 12:23am by the computer time here and when I was about to go to bed, I suddenly noticed you updated^-^ Talk about luck. Anyway, keep up the great work!:D

COSMO QUEN!! *bawls* Aw, why'd she have to die? Are you gonna kil Svrion too? You fiend! Oh well, I'm sure that something will happen to save him...right? RIGHT?!?

I loved this chapter! Very well-done and beautifully written:D Update soon.

Have fun in New York. You'll have a blast. I should know I live there. I'll be awaiting your update.

~KatrinaKaiba~

Aw, poor Hufanse. *hugs Hufanse* I can't wait till June 22! Then we get a whole new chapter! Whee!! *bounces around* I'm so excited!

Oh let him Hufanse have someone. He's so sweet. What happened to Cy and Svrion?

This is really good so far:D I love it! Update soon.