If Bellatrix fell off a cliff, I would be cursing myself for forgetting my camera.

i love it and i must see more

I absolutely -had- to send the bit about toddlers and Voldie to a friend, and we came up with a few things:

First words:
Vo-vo
kusho
cooio
ava-keva
aba kadaba

Mangled name:
o-di-moret
vo-mor-t
o-d'mor

And now I want to do an empirical study at a few totparks to figure out what would actually happen, at least with the mangled names bit.

I take this break from my regularly scheduled reading to whimper at the introductory dialogue of chapter 15. Specifically:

:Father! If you want to know that badly, sift through my mind. After all, you were curious enough to kiss me once.:

I say whimper because it's much more fun than laughing, and more controlled, however, to make sure my meaning is not mistaken the lolcats will translate:

Teh win. You haz it.

That is all.

Wonderful story. I really loved it.

that's awesome. i love it.

god, the ghost was a wonderful touch. and i like the mark on draco's neck. and the whole not-quite-relationship between severus and remus.

it's really nice to see a dark harry fic where he didn't go all evil and controlling.

eh. you have an interesting story here, but there's a crapload of mistakes in it. you say that you're focusing on relationships, but these relationships are often based off of the plot, and the plot has some seriously huge holes in it, most of which you seem to have noted (like the metamorohagus thing) but not tried to change.

and what was tom going to say many chapters earlier, where he changed his word after getting out pe- (if i remember correctly)?

i may come back and finish this story later, but i may not. it has promise, but also a lot of issues.

just a suggestion for the whole metamorphagus thing- seeing as harry didnt know he was a parselmouth until someone pointed it out, its possible voldemort wanted to test for a bunch of different weird magical quirks he had no idea he had, and one of the tests is for being a metamorphagi. this could be to see how much he is gaining by not killing harry, and all that rot.

Truly an amazing bad!Dumbledore fic. I loved how you wrote about Dobby in particular in the story.

What a wonderful story! I'm glad that a DarkLord!Harry story /that's complete/ actually exists!

Best story ever, great job!

awe hehehe *cooes*

=D

I find this story completely rounded and sophisticated, which is a refreshing change from the cliches that fanfiction authors throw about carelessly. I enjoy 'Forsaken' completely and to the most of my ability, though I'm only on chapter eight so far.

OMG this story is AMAZING! I'm sorry I can't write a very detailed rewiew, but I simply don't know what to say! Really well done!