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Jinnx 2008-03-27 . chapter 1
sequal please?
silkyblackboxers 2006-06-05 . chapter 1
Sad ending. Guys really are sometimes very blind. Or egotistical. Which ever comes first.
Eva Angel 2005-12-06 . chapter 1
Well that was...short.
Greasy Slimeballs 2004-10-09 . chapter 1
That was good, I love the cliffhanger.

Kimberly*Grace
JustVisitingUKgirl 2004-08-25 . chapter 1
Oh no! Why didn't she take him back?? I think you should carry it on... please? Now neither of them are happy. Please?
Ukgirl:)
Drummer Chick 13 2004-08-24 . chapter 1
It's so sad! It's really good though. Katie should of taken his "apology". Maybe its because I love Freddy (and Kevin Clark who plays him) but I hate when bad stuff happens to him.

Amanda:)
thedoorsrock 2004-08-18 . chapter 1
I like it has good potential you should continue it would make an awesome story. SEE YA
HollyGaydos 2004-08-06 . chapter 1
Good at first but it got crappy towards the end.This is noit a flame tho! Ur a good writer,dont quit!!O_o
ohbabyletsdisco 2004-08-06 . chapter 1
It's great! I like how you have them switch on and off of their POV's. Write more!
-Emily
Nanners-77 2004-08-03 . chapter 1
WOw..that was pretty good. I liked it. It would probably be better suited for a full fanfic, but a one-shot's good too.
rockin awesome x 2004-08-03 . chapter 1
Awesome! Freddy can be so stupid...! Anyway, good work!
lilstrummrgrl527 2004-08-02 . chapter 1
No! Argh! WHY?
It was good, but why didn't she take what he said? It was an apology in the language of Freddy! Make him apologize, please!
Zank you!
Suicidal Mickey Mouse 2004-08-02 . chapter 1
It is to good!! Don't you be putting yourself down Missy! You are a good writer. And this one shot was good. You got into the emotions well. If you want any help with Woes feel free to e-mail me BTW, I'll be happy to help.
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