Wow. How you made this so...real with Rory and Jess and everything they've been through. You describe everything so well, I can picture it all in my head. And that's usually what you want to happen with the readers.

This is an amazing story, I wish there were more of them like them. But, then again, it's what make these kinds of stories special. =]] I am a fan of this story. I don't usually read one-shots, but this one is just...so amazing.

Keep writing!

that is soo sad omg it almost brought me to full out tears, it's amazing ;)

Yana

I haven't read a lot of your work (not yet anyway...I'm going to though, cos your writing is amazing!), but somehow when I read one of your stories, it always has this...vibe...around it. They're pretty dark fics that always leave me with some mixed feelings. It makes me kind of sad, but at the same time they make me smile, because your writing impresses me so much! Your stories are always very original and...well...that's it. This was beautiful. Thank you for writing this.

Aw, that was awsome! I loved it, so powerful..and..amazing. Wow. :-D

Hey!

Beautifully done and written.

Bye, smile :-)

Can you say PERFECT? Because that's exactly what this fic is.
It's so sad and bittersweet.

"I never wanted to be that girl," she says abruptly.

"What?"

"The one-night stand. Especially not to you."

"What, am I special?"

She looks away, fierce glare grazing the unused fireplace instead of him. "You know you are."

I don't know why but this part made me cry...great fanfic!!

A great collaboration! This was good! I've read a lot of "Rory/Jess one-night stands", but this is the best one. By far. I love it.

First of all...

The best way to deal with a mistake is to pretend it never existed. That way it slowly fades into history, and after a while, it is never remembered.

I love that. It's so perfect and so Rory and Jess.

Such a gorgeous story. Your maturity and writing skill never fail to amaze me. I love the narrative technique, with the flashbacks threaded through the story.

The finality of it hovers above them, and she thinks she's not ready to let it fall.

Again, perfect. I'm a sucker for images like that and you've done it perfectly.