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Arrow 5/7/07 . chapter 1
i love the story

great ash/mistyness
Anna 4/9/07 . chapter 1
That was so nice Soft AshxMisty goodies for all There should be more stories like this one
Borua 7/11/06 . chapter 1
AW that was so cute! I saw the link for it on serebiiforums ad I just HAD to read it! It was an awesome choice! YOU MUST keep writing!
IamFishCrashing 6/20/06 . chapter 1
aw they figured out how they feel for eachother heheheheh and it was a dead give away to ash i meen "love misty"! why didnt she just say it in the letter then again ash is dence so he probly over looked it haha
Nick Johnson 5/12/05 . chapter 1
I have these questions to ask you about this fanfic. 1. What is this fanfic about? 2. When do you suppose it takes place? 3. It mostly takes place at the Cerulean City Gym, right? 4. Is she the same age as she was in the series? 5. If not, then how old is she? 6. Just how old do you suppose anyone else that is in this fanfic is? 7. What kind of Pokemon does Misty have in her posession? 8. There the same Pokemon she had in the series, right? Be sure to answer these questions. If you want, you can choose which questions you feel like answering at this time. And any left over can be answered within this fanfic. And I will have some more questions to ask you to answer later.
mystery 10/22/04 . chapter 1
aw couldnt u hav written more? i hate cliffie hangers! (_
emma 10/6/04 . chapter 1
AGGH! your story is awesome! i wish it wasnt a one shot, its great i love it! please write more! congratulations, you have one sure fan!
Maria 9/15/04 . chapter 1
Aw! So cute! _ Great job!
pikachurage 9/14/04 . chapter 1
Awesome. especially descriptive 'bout emotions. you should write more than one chapter.
Ghost 9/10/04 . chapter 1
This is a cute story. I liked it a lot! I really did! Great job!
Crystal Mew 8/12/04 . chapter 1
Aw...! that was so sweet! I loved this story. j.w is this the only chapter? you should go on, you are an awesome writer, and I don't say that about everyone. great job, I really enjoyed it, thanks for PMing me the link!
Mwahaha The Random Reviwer strikes again 8/7/04 . chapter 1
Whe! *claps* That was great! Nice sybolism(can't.spell.to.save.my.life) Now..Time for the random reviews 5 point check points!

Story Flow!: Nice, it has the smoth flow that makes a story nice to read. You pick up on things, that most don't! Giving you the 1 point for this part of a story -

Boring?: No, not at all boring whatsoever. Some stoies I have fallen asleep reading, this story gets right to the point and doesn't lag to much, but also takes enough time to give that 'flow'. You get the 1 point for this to!

Unique?: Yes-Yes! Alot of stories have Ash and Misty writing to each other.. But None like yours. You added a fresh, gorgeous touch to the story. One point for this to!

To short?: Hell no! Like a said before, you got it done just in the right time..Nothing lagged. One point for this to!

To Long: Nope, Nope! As, I've said twice, you didn't lag. Another 1 point for this!

Meaning..You score a full five points! *throws candy to you*

I have an idea for another fanfic..Why don't you do this same story, but from Ash's point of view? That, would be really cool to read -
gladdecease 8/6/04 . chapter 1
Kawaii! Very kawaii. Keep up the good work in all your stories...especially in the aaml category! _ Later!
gentleness28 8/3/04 . chapter 1
Yay! You write so emotionally-beautiful! _ I wish this wasn't a one-shot, but you're probably busy with other stuff...so I guess I'll have to deal with the one-shot-ness...*sigh*

You really seem to understand the characters well! I haven't seen Pokemon in a while, but after reading this story, lots of memories came back to me. I mean, I can totally picture Misty and Ash saying those things in their letters. Aww...Luvdisc! That cuteness!

Keep Writing! _
Ze-Cookie 8/3/04 . chapter 1
AWW! That was so cute! (talks to the fanfic like its a little baby) Ok, seriously. I loved that fic! It was... ehh.. I dunno the word... It's a good word... ehh.. It was... AWESOME! There ya go! Yes, awesome, the most commonly used word by me. D

Ze Cookie
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