wow!! I LOVE! AEON FLUX!! I downloaded "the purge", "the demiurge"," isthmus crypticus" ,"reraizure" , and "end sinister" unto my Video ipod... I love love love it! so sad it's not on anymore!! i want at least 3 seasons!! lol sigh but nice story! i enjoyed it!! can you write more? more chapters and different stories!! please! lol ok well good story!! bye bye hey umm...u think u can write fluff scenes? lol

this was excellent. the writing is done very, very nicely. it produces great visuals, and it's so similar to the actual cartoon episodes... i'm impressed and pleased. i'd love for this to continue. keep up the GREAT work.