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Reviews for: One Step at a Time
RedFive
2007-12-03 . chapter 1
Ah!! *flails* This was lovely. Thank you very, very much.

""Are you okay, mister?"

He stared at her intently for a long minute. "Have you ever heard the joke about the baby polar bear?" he asked her. She blinked, shook her head, looked like she was seriously considering backing away, running into her apartment, and locking the door before phoning the police.

Peter looked back up at the sky and laughed as the rain poured down on him. "I'm freezing," he said, and kept laughing."

Loved that part.
Emsta
2004-08-12 . chapter 1
i like it, i think its interesting that he doesn't go back and meet up with people, although it makes sense. it wouldn't have worked if Assumpta hadn't been there, and im pretty sure she did actually die, so i guess wat i'm saying is that it worked out for the best
pol
2004-08-06 . chapter 1
a lovely little story and probably one much needed. it's such a relief not to have another au popping up...i'm so relieved and impressed that you stuck to character and still made it work. thank you. it's been a long time that i've missed these characters and it's wonderful to be able to experience that world again.
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