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| Jane 2006-03-05 ch 1, anon. | abusethat's so cute!! *-* I love it!! |
| Arauru 2005-03-27 ch 1, | abuseTHAT was RANDOM! xD Cool , but hard to understand . VERY hard to understand . |
| ArchFaith 2004-11-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was just really, really bad. Is English your first language? I get the impression that it isn't...punctuation was way off. Commas, capitalization...really hard to read. Maybe if you cleaned this up it would be a much better fic. |
| rriight.... 2004-09-24 ch 1, anon. | abuse(O.o) ...um?...it seemed..a little strange...but i guess its the way you wanted to write it,right?... |
| Disgusted! 2004-09-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseew! |
| Paineful 2004-08-07 ch 1, | abuse...Wow... You know what? I don't believe I've ever seen this pairing before. I always liked to think of Shorty and Kitty on a sisterly-basis, but I guess they can be a pairing too. o_o Hey! It's your fic, write it the way you want, right? I just thought it was a tiny bit rushed at some places and a tiny bit slow at others. But still cute. ^-^ Love how you put in Shorty's fake French accent (it killed me in BaG1!), heheheh...xD Write more BaG fanfiction and stuff! This was cute. ^^ Love, Paineful. |