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Reviews For: Ohayo gozaimasu,ai

Jane
2006-03-05
ch 1, anon.
abusethat's so cute!! *-* I love it!!
Arauru
2005-03-27
ch 1,
abuseTHAT was RANDOM!
xD Cool , but hard to understand . VERY hard to understand .
ArchFaith
2004-11-06
ch 1,
abuseThat was just really, really bad. Is English your first language? I get the impression that it isn't...punctuation was way off. Commas, capitalization...really hard to read.
Maybe if you cleaned this up it would be a much better fic.
rriight....
2004-09-24
ch 1, anon.
abuse(O.o) ...um?...it seemed..a little strange...but i guess its the way you wanted to write it,right?...
Disgusted!
2004-09-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseew!
Paineful
2004-08-07
ch 1,
abuse...Wow...

You know what? I don't believe I've ever seen this pairing before. I always liked to think of Shorty and Kitty on a sisterly-basis, but I guess they can be a pairing too. o_o

Hey! It's your fic, write it the way you want, right?

I just thought it was a tiny bit rushed at some places and a tiny bit slow at others. But still cute. ^-^ Love how you put in Shorty's fake French accent (it killed me in BaG1!), heheheh...xD

Write more BaG fanfiction and stuff! This was cute. ^^

Love,
Paineful.
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