I'm a little curious about the name of this episode. I don't quite see how anyone was healed. I mean, i suppose that talking about her past to the others was a form of admission and that's the first step toward healing, but other than that I don't really see a complete healing of anyone.
It was a very interesting chapter. I kind of expected either romance between Ax and her or Marco and her. I mean, they're the only guys not taken, so it was a bit of a coin-flip. I'm sure there will be more for them to say concerning Maya's heritage, but you'll probably cover that pretty soon...

OMG!

"I'm serious. I thought that she was normal. Like, the only normal person in my neighborhood so I was like 'Take care of this dog while I'm away.' And I come home and the dog is SHAVEN. Nora had to buy her dog SWEATERS because she was SHAVEN. What would have to be going through your HEAD to SHAVE a dog? She was like, 'her hair looked tangled so I SHAVED your DOG because that seemed so LOGICAL.'" - ROFLMAO!

That was THE most hilarious thing I have ever read in my life. And I simply adored this chapter.

Sinister Shadow

I don't know WHAT made me read this fic first, but I'm glad I did. It's REALLY good. Aww, KP, I think Maya and Marco should hook up. They are SO cute, and it works because Marco doesn't have a girlfriend!

::keeps reading:: Excellent first chapters!

Sinister Shadow

i'll get to the princess... eventually.

and, as usual, excellent work. That is a pretty clever idea, using satellites to convert lakes into feeding grounds. I think you should try and look into quantum entanglement for something. Its a really cool idea, and i think it would enhance the abilities of the Yeerks much more drastically. (In a nutshell, quantum entanglement causes one partical that is entangled with another to behave just as if it were that same particle. For example, say that i move particle A to the left. Entabgled particle B would also move to the left, even though there wouldn't be any forces to cause the movement. FYI, its actually been done and people are trying to implement it into communications)

id love to get on to read ur other fics, (I finally got the chance since school ended) but i have work in 5 hours...

i hope that i will get to read ur other fics soon though, since you never seem to fail to deliver.

P.S.

two things i noticed between the shrink and this.
1, you seem to copy and paste a LOT of stuff when going over history. idk if u do it to remind the readers in case they forgot or just as fillers, but i think you should just say, and so she told them and continue on.
2, you have really been keeping with your original story line, something that i would never be able to do, so kudos to u

and so i bid adieu, and update soon... (so that i have more to read next time i can!)

*laughs at the mental image of Maya biting Visser Three* Okay, I realise that probably wasn't supposed to be funny, but I'm a spazz, so :P

Anyway, Off to finaly read the last one. ^_^.

haha this thing wont lemme sign in but wheres my response!! :( lol, keep writing!! are u a senior?? whoa.. ur so much older than me.. well not rlly.. anyways keep it up :P laterz

hi i'm back. i liked this chapter but i don't understand what happened to rosa.

Okay, fine, so maybe I exaggerated a LITTLE.

HURRY UP AND GET THE NEXT CHAPTER UP YOU PHOO-HEAD!! WHICH IS SPELLED PHOO NOT PHOU BECAUSE I RULE THE WORLD AND THE WORLD IS PHOO!

Yay! New chappy!
Ahem.
Good chapter, although somewhat rushed towards the end. But the begining- I did notice you made Maya do some more 'Nadar' acts, which is good, because it seemed that part of her character was fading when she met the Animorphs. And I'm pretty sure you don't want her to change too much until after the war. I liked how she reflected on the assassin is cool society image, alough Maya isn't really an assassin, who is usually hired to kill a particular person, while Maya is fighting a war and just doesn't care if someone dies while she fights. And do the Animoprhs know she killed the woman? If they did, I would expect some rebuke for that.
'They told me later the dolphins got us out.' Whoa, hold on here. Are they at an underwater base right now? Otherwise the dolphins couldn't have gotten them out. And for some reason I thought they were at the Yeerk pool. Even if they were underwater, itmight have been better to elaborate some more on their escape and have Mays fall unconcious right before it... I keep wondering how the dolphins did it.
And near the end, I would really have liked to see something between the 'morphs and Rosa...especially Marco. Does she know he's her brother? How are they going to deal with this? You really left us hanging in the Rosa department.
It was a very informative chapter, however, and I can't wait for the next book.
~A-cat
PS~ Seriously funny mental image here, though- Maya hanging onto the Visser with her teeth!

that's the link and hopefully it'll show up correctly. it' vermicular then a 2 and then three zeros.

wow! you're done with a book again *pats KP on the back* man, i wish i could do that!

that was great that Maya totally ignored Marco's "Animorph code of honor thing" hehehe, and then that she felt bad about it later (not quite as unfeeling as she seems, huh?)

and i liked the whole bit about assassins.. very good, and you're right in every book i've ever read of one, they are portrayed as being heros.

that was hilarious that Maya tossed Rosa's body at the Visser! and then when she bit him! lol!

and Ax was the one who saved Maya, huh? i'm still hoping for an Ax/Maya, you realize?

anywho... hurry up with that next story of yours!

: )

DH

OH MY GOSH! YOU CAN'T END IT HERE! no! ::can't wait for next story:: Curse you and your amazing writing skills of doom! ::shakes fist:: Oh, well. HUrry and get it out, though!

It won't let me review for chap.6, as I allready have, so I'll have to do it here.

Anways, I was going to say how I like how you reviewed for me. Again. And how I didn't realize it until after I had reviewed.

Phoo to you.

Fwee. Fwaa. Why were they more shocked by Marco's having a sister than her being a Nadar? Just curious. You don't have to answer, because I'll just ask you when I see you next. Bye!

You say it was weird, but I liked it. Parts of the beginning of the summary was a little rough, but as it went along, especially at the end, I really like it. It's like all the Nadar's subconscience - through Maya's subconscience - is talking to us. Or rather me, as the use of "you" makes it really personal.

Fwoo! County Chorus is over. Fwee!

Good chapter. Especially the jumping of the cliff scene. T'was tres amusing.