Good concept, well thought out and excellently executed.

I'm not sure how I ran across this story, but I am so glad I did!! I loved it! Great job!

=^..^=

This absolutely astounds me. I'm not sure where to begin.

Right off the bat, your story felt... different. Your description and dialogue were beautifully balanced, and your plot moved just how it needed to at any one time. Your feel for the characters and command of their voice left me forgetting I was reading fanfiction. You have a great knowledge of both universes, and melded them beautifully. I also loved your discontinuity between the two 'verses - the lack of scientific explanations for magical phenomena, the older Weasley brothers not knowing what an electron was. I like how there are things left undone and imperfect but open such as Dumbledore's fate, the treaty, Harry's PTSD and snake-issues, and even McGonagall's long-distance courting by Bra'tac (this relationship is perfect).

There are so many gems within this story (like Harry over-throwing the snake-Goa'uld - yes, we all like to see the Tok'ra with egg on their faces sometimes) as well as moods and arcs you've woven across the story, like Harry's emotional responses to death and killing (and how you dealt with this more subtly as the story progressed).

Gosh, I could write an essay. I won't, but I need to say more than just 'good job'. You're a star, thank you for this.

cool.fantastic. iam speechless with awe.wow. vold posessing harry-harry refusing to help the symbioate? this writing style is brillaint and captivating.well done!

how can harry not fight it!

I absolutely loved this story. Are you ever planning to write a sequel?
Anyway, I am off to read any other HP stories you've got.

holy mother of god!

Oh yah this is getting good!

awesome!

Ah the temptation to be a god... id of been like, yeah i rule.

oh shit whats gonna happen!

Woot, awesome chapter, and harry wants to kill yay!

LoL idiots, cant mess with the US mil!

OH shit that was awesome.

Keep it up i love this!

Woot glad they are at the base, i cant wait to read more!