Well, some words are used in the wrong places, and the chapters can be seperate.. unless you like it that way, of course.

But I love this story, it's unbelievably sweet and cute :)

I can see these two as friends if nothing else, though I do like to pair them

I really like it.. I could feel Integra's pain and guilt...

aand at the end I felt warm and fuzzy :)

XD integral is a tad bit ooc but i still love this fic!

*gasp* i hoenslty cant believe integral would actually try to trade alucard! no way!

but i love the happy ending thanks very much! XD

It's good for a start, though you seem to have a few mistakes, mainly using one word for another (except instead of accept)... Also, chapters can be put up seperately, unless you like having them up three at a time.

Wonderful... A great piece of work here. It leaves a lot of things to be thought up by the reader and yet contains just enough information for the reader to know what is going on. Brilliant.