this is very interesting. poor sonny getting stuffed in a crate. you should seriously keep it going

Cool keep it up :)

I love this one! Keep it up!

i think its good start i hope they do indeed make a sequel if they were too this would be a good storyline

well, it wasn't very nice stop the fic in this point, because the fic seems very interesting! :D

Based on your summary, you're not the only one who wanted to see Dr. Calvin and Det. Spooner hook up.

As for the story, This is a fine tale to tell, and your ideas are great. You need to really work on spelling and pacing. Consult a thesaurus, and proofread.