How sweet and amusing. Like you said, unrealistic, but a good read nonetheless.

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Really enjoyed reading this story! It was entertaining and romantic (the secret sappy side of mine was greatly appeased)!

Hah! I have the exact same problem! Once I start getting into a book, I'll lose complete track of the outside world around me! Of course, I don't get to have hot demons stalking me, nor do I get killed and then brought back to life by said hot demon...damn. Oh well! Can't wait to read the rest, I too obsess over mystery novels. ^_^

hahah love it!

A perfectly fantastic ending! ^_^

I love the style and how addicting they are to each other

Truly fantastic :)

I'm loving it so far. :)

Just read this entire story today and enjoyed it immensely. Saw your profile and you haven't been on this site in a long time. On the off chance that you read this, I found this story through CalebKing's profile in her favorite stories list. She's written a couple of stories that I like. I've found that if I like an author there is a good chance I like their favorite stories too.

That's so sweet! And I really want to read the book that started everything for those two, even if it doesn't exist.

Odd pair with an odder beginning.. But I can't get enough of your creative writing, I love it :D

the story was interesting to say the least.
it just had a lot of occ and it tended to avoid the realities that would occur with the other demons and the hardships they would go through, but i guess it was all because this was a happy story. it was well written, and im glad i came across it. :)

The story is so cute...
enjoyed the conversations and the "fights"
keep up the cool work XD

Yes a totally completely innocent addiction. Please note that I'm being sarcastic there. This was a cute story, well written and defiantly not silly. I thought that the story was simply amazing and that it doesn't matter if it was not closely related to the plot of Inuyasha, the anime or the magma, and that makes it simply enjoyable.

Wonderful story. The humor was a bit strange at times but it does make a wonderful story because of it. Thank you for sharing your work. =)