A great story. Very good.

:-)

That's really really good. I like the last sentence.

that was really good i love doyle and you brought him back in a good way

Very good! keep up the writing!

Very good story I liked your writting.

This was so good! I could see it all in my head, too. Waah, Doyle! Come back!

Great! The Doyle dialogue was right on! You captured his character well. Loved the Wesley bashing within. Always a plus. :) Keep up the good work!

Very touching.

VEry well done

its really good, write a sequel and if u can, read my sotries under the name IceAngel8

peace out!