Great job on the story I liked it alot, pooor Donny (sobs) is my thrid favorite turtle.

Wow, good job. This story is and was very interesting.

I throughly enjoyed this story. I thought it was full of emotion, suspense, and exatly was the turtles might do in the situation. It was correct to call it the dark history. The only sugestion I have is elaborate on the final battle with the Shredder and Donnies death. I am still not exactly sure on how he died. Maybe a funeral or sumthing. Also how did April get her job back? I dunno...it left me wanting more, which can be good, but this time it was too much more. Thanks for the great story

Though much darker than I imagined, this is still a great story. I liked seeing each Turtle's thoughts and feelings, how they viewed the world around them. This was a refreshing retelling of the original story. Great job!

great story please make one about the second and third movie

Wow, what can't I say. That was a very well written story. I say it could have been a better first movie. I thought it was a little over-emotional but it was still good. Poor Donnie, that whole family was a wreck, but being the TMNT you always know they can get through it together. A very well written story and good luck in the future!

Another Obsessive TMNT fan,

Tiger

Hey this story was sensational.

Great! I really enjoyed that! Keep up the great work.

Very good. I really liked the dark side of what could have been. Keep writing.

This took me nearly two days of sitting in front of my computer reading, but it was well worth it. You have a talent. This story has touched me in ways I couldn't even begin to describe. It was a take off of the original movie, yet so original. I enjoyed it even more than I enjoyed the movie itself. A bit dark at times, a bit violent at times, but still, a story that I will look back on with a smile. I thank you for this beautifully orchestrated piece, which held me until the last line. The line which brought tears to my eyes. Thank you.