This was good, but your lovely category has been since misused...

its good an thanx for makin an open range catagory :D

keep on going i loved it

aw poor mose and Button, 8(

Good chapter, you captured the characters well.

I love it this is my fav move of all time keep going

this is really good, why don't you continue with this?

Cool! it's Open Range! Sorry 'bout that I like western movies... anywho, i liked your story, thaks fro showing these people that likin' westerns is something in life.. Ok now, peace out.

u should rite more about this subject. i like the movie but ican't put my ords down. im saving them so that they can be part of a crossover.

okay, Open range is one of my favorite movies and i have watched it a lot so why did you decide that button and mose die? BEACAUSE THEY DONT!

I really like this story...I was always wondering what might've happened back at the camp. I had about the same vision as you did.

Keep up the good work.

Aww, I started writing a story about this scene too... but I never got around to finishing it. This is pretty good, but you haven't updated it in over a month and a half. Aren't you going to continue? I'd love to see how you interpret Boss and Charley.

Keep going!

Kara

ya i never saw the movie so i don't get all the jokes but i choose this cause youre the only one doing open range. thats really cool. you should come read my parody so i can get more traffic.

I love your story. Fits with the movie good. I loved Button! I'm a huge Diego Luna fan (if the pen name didn't give it away). I think the whole movie was about Button because they have the gun fight to get back at Baxter for what they did to Button and Mose. I personally like when Charley shoots the guy in the head for shooting Button. Anyway, your story is really good.

If there is no Open Range category, then I suggest you create one