PLZ UPDATE SOON! THIS IS SO GOOD!

Love the fic, hope you update soon!

Been reading your bio too, I think you should make an excel saga/FOP fic. Cosmo and Excel in the same fic... WOW!

Gav

Keep writing!

love it

O...M...G...I...love...your...fanfic...:o

Well, for having an OC character in it, it's caught my interest _ I found it a little hard to read with the paragraphs together. Too many people talking in one paragraph... But overall I like it _ I hope you continue!

It's very well written-very uh...poetic. I'm not a big fan of swearing though...but it was still good.

Ugh, -pukes- I can't believe I didn't catch SO MANY of the grammer/spelling errors I made! Im really-really-REALLY sorry!

I knew I should have checked it over after editing some spots...I need a BETA reader...Most definetly..-cries-

I'll make CosmicMoon do it. muaha!

-signed-

plz more. it reminds me a lot of my life. plz don't be like the people who start something but dont finish it!i like Ay'lah cuz she knda fits me perfectly. is Timmy gonna fall in luv with her? i certenly hope so cuz someone can help timmy destroy vicky, i mean transport her to a place where she was accidently run over by a train while her body sticks out like a lighting rod during a thunder storm!