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PurpleWabbit
2009-08-18 . chapter 1
That was brilliant.
Ducky'sgirl4ever
2009-05-17 . chapter 1
A great story. Very good.
too many stars to count
2008-12-21 . chapter 1
This was really cute. I like how they all just let each other pretend that they don't know about the other. I liked the way Jim always wakes up when he hears the sirens.
This was really good. :)
The Lauderdale
2008-11-23 . chapter 1
I tumbled to this through a circuitous route, by way of OH JOHN RINGO NO. Seems like you're a good writer whatever it is you put your hand to. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
KrisEleven
2008-11-16 . chapter 1
So cute! Very well written, I enjoyed this. I liked your voice for the Commissioner.

KrisEleven~
tomorrow4eva
2008-10-28 . chapter 1
I wonder what Filby really thinks. Lol.
gaudy night
2008-07-21 . chapter 1
What a beautiful piece. I enjoyed reading Gordon's thoughts and reflections on life and relationships. He's a great character, and I'm very glad you are writing about him. Thank you for the wonderful, nostalgic read.
hoheehum
2008-06-29 . chapter 1
Love it! Very nice!
And I loved Filby :D
Trinity Day
2007-08-05 . chapter 1
Nicely done.
shallowness
2007-07-29 . chapter 1
Such a lovely story, deceptively simple in terms of what happens although great bit of action wrting - but with the repetition and build up, it landed quite a punch. I particularly loved Jim's wry self-awareness and the connection between him and Cass.
Rayni
2006-11-11 . chapter 1
What a great fic. ;_; Cass and Jim Gordon. I would never have thought of sticking the two of them in conversation together, but it was beautiful. Excellent job!
Joanna
2006-09-27 . chapter 1
Beautifully written.
Equinox
2006-09-21 . chapter 1
I love it. It's a great picture of Jim and how he feels towards Babs and also a great potrait of Cass.

I hope she stops by for hot chocolate soon, Jim could use the company.

~Nox
Amarin Rose
2005-07-09 . chapter 1
A very intruiging look at what Jim Gordon thinks of the superhero lifestyle. No recriminations about Batman getting his little girl hurt, because he knows Barbara would have done it anyway, and Batman already feels badly enough. They're both alike in their protectiveness towards their children/wards/sidekicks and both have realized that you can't fix everything no matter how hard you try. But that doesn't mean you quit trying...

And this extremely long monologue is just my long-winded way of syaing I liked the bittersweet, happy *realness* of this fic. :)
AnimeFan101
2005-04-09 . chapter 1
Whoa.

And I'm channeling Keanu, at either his best or worst, depending on who you're talking to.

Gotta say, I like this little short. You did an awesome job with how Gordon must feel after retiring, with so many years behind him being right in the middle of the action. You even captured the trait he developed over years of working with the Bat clan, what I think makes him the best type of cop: his unwillingness to breach the sanctity of the cowl.

Really enjoyed this little slice. And now, I'm gonna kit your list of fics to see what else you got out there.

Keep it real!
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