That was brilliant.

A great story. Very good.

This was really cute. I like how they all just let each other pretend that they don't know about the other. I liked the way Jim always wakes up when he hears the sirens.
This was really good. :)

I tumbled to this through a circuitous route, by way of OH JOHN RINGO NO. Seems like you're a good writer whatever it is you put your hand to. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

So cute! Very well written, I enjoyed this. I liked your voice for the Commissioner.

KrisEleven~

I wonder what Filby really thinks. Lol.

What a beautiful piece. I enjoyed reading Gordon's thoughts and reflections on life and relationships. He's a great character, and I'm very glad you are writing about him. Thank you for the wonderful, nostalgic read.

Love it! Very nice!
And I loved Filby :D

Nicely done.

Such a lovely story, deceptively simple in terms of what happens although great bit of action wrting - but with the repetition and build up, it landed quite a punch. I particularly loved Jim's wry self-awareness and the connection between him and Cass.

What a great fic. ;_; Cass and Jim Gordon. I would never have thought of sticking the two of them in conversation together, but it was beautiful. Excellent job!

Beautifully written.

I love it. It's a great picture of Jim and how he feels towards Babs and also a great potrait of Cass.

I hope she stops by for hot chocolate soon, Jim could use the company.

~Nox

A very intruiging look at what Jim Gordon thinks of the superhero lifestyle. No recriminations about Batman getting his little girl hurt, because he knows Barbara would have done it anyway, and Batman already feels badly enough. They're both alike in their protectiveness towards their children/wards/sidekicks and both have realized that you can't fix everything no matter how hard you try. But that doesn't mean you quit trying...

And this extremely long monologue is just my long-winded way of syaing I liked the bittersweet, happy *realness* of this fic. :)

Whoa.

And I'm channeling Keanu, at either his best or worst, depending on who you're talking to.

Gotta say, I like this little short. You did an awesome job with how Gordon must feel after retiring, with so many years behind him being right in the middle of the action. You even captured the trait he developed over years of working with the Bat clan, what I think makes him the best type of cop: his unwillingness to breach the sanctity of the cowl.

Really enjoyed this little slice. And now, I'm gonna kit your list of fics to see what else you got out there.

Keep it real!