This is refering to all four chapters so far.

...OMFG! I was laughing so hard tears were coming out! Kurama seemed like the only one in character, but you make it work! REALLY work! I'm still trying to wrap my head around Karasu, Hiei, and Kurama actually getting along. I would never even contemplate the idea of them getting along. And Kuronue! Cute, adorable Kuronue! I love him, and Kurama too! I wonder if Yoko's going to come into the picture... Well, I'll have to read more later to find out, won't I?

Anyway, I love your story and I hope more laughs are along the way. Cya! =D

omg this was a very random and awesome story! (though random it had plot)
mika and ayumi were some really awesome oc's! i loved them!
great fic! you did very good on it! X3

Well, I must say this was an absolute thrill to read. The humour was constant throughout but there was a decent plot going and the characters weren't shallow. Good job!

I agree with you, this chapter was extremely amusing. I can't wait to keep reading!

Awesome...

that was an AWESOME story! my gosh i havent laughed and cried at the same time so much! great job! i cant wait to read the sequel! keep up the good work!

omgomgomgomg y y did it end just now!? I LOVED IT SO MUCH! plz update the sequel im gonna DIE if you dont

YOU ARE AWESOME! that story was i can't wait to read your other stories

just want to put this in my faves!

You. Are. Awesome.

Period.

NO! IT ALL OVER NOT FAIR! *points accusingly and crys histerically* *ahem* awesome story, funny as hell,... well see ya! ^_^

OMG I litirally fell out of my chair laughing, like, 5 times while I was reading this story! I love it! Well, I'm off to read the sequel now!

-“so he just averted his eyes.” it’s a myth that if you look into a camera directly, your soul will be trapped in the picture. Hiei’s superstitious! XD

So is Yukina, but she won't even be in a picture. And Hiei really does avert his eyes for the pic taken at Kubikukuri Island after the Ankoku Bujutsukai. It's the one that Yuusuke picks up to look at at the end of the credit song Sayonara Bye Bye when Keiko is sitting on a nearby rock (in case anybody's wondering.)


Loved the story dear and can't wait to read the sequel. It was greatly funny even if you did change character personalities quite a bit at times...

How funny. I was just going to mention as I read through this chapter that Kenji reminded me of Hojo too. I guess you must have subconsciously drawn his mold from him, right?

Love the story, if it's a bit odd for the entire starting concept... You do have a few gramatical errors too that you might want to fix up though. I've seen 'your' and 'you're' mixed up a few times as well as a couple other similar little "details" misused in previous chapters.

You do realize that your favorite line was said by the Muddy Bomb though, the only of his talking explosives...right?