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bluetinkerbell
2004-08-05 . chapter 1
AW! It is so poetically...justified...I don't know how to describe it but it's just what you hope she feels before she gets...gets...killed...Stupid Sephiroth...

Anyways, it had a tad bit of melancholiness, which came about through the way you made her sound so hopeful. But we know what happens...and...yeah...Wow. I started off so well and then the review got really lame. I'll try and make it better...

"Praying that she will not be forgotten." That was probably the most powerful line in the whole drabble, because it, again, did poetic justice to her feelings.

You're awesome!
Collarander the Unicorn
2004-08-05 . chapter 1
Oh, that was a nice piece of writing.
I think it portrays Aeris quite well on her thoughts before her prayer for Holy.
Miyamashi
2004-08-05 . chapter 1
Very nice. You captured her personality quite well, even in such a small amount of words.
littlematchgirl
2004-08-04 . chapter 1
short and sweet...

-LMG
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