oh common...will u plz finishthis story? T.T

Why you don´t continue? Story is really good, it will be nice if we can read the rest of it.

Why did you stop I want to know what nexts!Please

Its really good i want ot know more. You have a way of describing things. I can almost see it all happening

oh wow! wonderful! but- leo's dying! no!

my oinly concern with this story is that you're giving up on it! you musn't! please! getting over a writer's block might be hard, but YOU CAN DO IT!

wowowowoowowowowowowowowowowowoowowowowowowowow! please update soon! this is briliant! don't abandon this story!

Oh...please finish!

UPDATE-UPDATE-UPDATE-UPDATE-UPDATE-UPDATE-UPDATE PLEASE!

cool. i wanna read the rest of it. it sounds really good!

*gasps* YOU UPDATED! *huggles*

Go Leo! Go Leo! It's your birthday! Kick 'Leo's' arse!

Haha, Raph doesn't like needles. I don't either. Ick.

I love it.I hope you updated soon^_^

been a long time coming,had to reread previous chaptors.Interesting slant to story dont know about spiritual plane sounds more like drug induced plane.you will have to update all stories quicker it cant be that hard ;)

Great going! (thought I'd review just because.) I'm really loving the story even though I pretty much know where it's going... You write really well! Keep writing and contact me if you need help with anything.

Hey this is a good story! Please hurry and do an update...I want to see what happens next.

Ok... I am so glad you wrote.. but now i need to know what is going to happen worse then before.. please I am begging write...i love this story...