sweet chapter, can't wait to read the next one and find out what she's gonna do.

I LOVE this story. I read it all on your website, but couldn't find the link to fanfiction for you. Finally I did. Yay me. Anywho, like is said i luv your story. much prase from me.

Well Pyreo I must say that this was an excellent angst/romance fic. None of the characters were OOC and you provided the readers with adequate description as well as emotional insight. You know I don’t see to many Stitch/OC fics around, most are Stitch/Angel or Stitch/Lilo. I don’t mind either (as long as they’re well written) but they can get a bit… well, mundane. So this was a breath of fresh air in the romance department of L&S fan fiction, (for me at least).

Now as for Demon: Not only did I like the warm fuzzy moments between her and Stitch, but she as an individual is definitely awesome and not to mention very original. I also think her abilities suite her well, seeing as she is a bit of a hot head. XD But when contrasted with Angel she seems very different, not just physically but from an emotional standpoint as well. Whereas Angel (in your story) is selfish, focused, cold and calculating. Demon is confused and lonely, it’s really quite a shame that Angel couldn’t except that Stitch had fallen out of love with her and just be happy for him. But anyway, good story and if you decide to write more someday (which I hope you do) then I’ll always be more than willing to review. Au Revoir Mon Amie. :D

Yay! I love that story! That would be the best movie ever. Besides Lilo and Stitch, of course. =D

Haha, that song. It's amazing how it fits the story so well. =D Love it!

You're story is really amazing. You also are good at making all the stuff Jumba explains seem real. =D

Oh! Demon, not Pyreo. Nevermind. I always thought that was her name. Sorry! Awesome story, though. I love the idea of the two antennae glowing.

I don't mind your couple. Any couple of Stitch's that isn't all into herself is cool. I supposed Pyreo. ^_^

This is a really good story so far! Can't wait to read more! =D

hi i read Aloha and the shinig path so far and i must say i'm very impressed you are very talented. I also saw a pic of her and i think she is so cute no wonder she and stitch like each other. i really hope you submit more pictures soon. I am also a writer Nothing special but I make up characters and the funny thing is I don't even have to plan anything I sort of combined genres. Once again i loved your story and i think you should seriously write kids books one day which is what i'll be doing although i'm not the best. I'll send another submission after I've checked out your other stories. take care from Angela

Quite interesting.
From an unbiased point of view, you really did a great job. Powers were great, great conflict, fight scenes were well done.

From my biased point of view... I won't go there.

Great story! Has got to be the best romantic Lilo and Stitch fanfic in this website! Demon and Stitch are so cute together! Make sure to make a sequel!

(P.S. Recodnize me? I'm PlasmaBoy20 from but I'm MetroidX20 here. Make sure to watch for my update on my fanfic 'The Phazon Effect'.)

...Wow. That's really all I can say. Wow.

Jacob Baker Speaking: Aw, That's so cute, ending it with a kiss and all.

Thank you for the great Celebi. You should make a sequel were Demon and Stitch have Kids,and Lilo catches them... doing something. And as a final note to all Angel/Stitch hater fans. FUCK YOU.
extra scene
David: Look you two have been acting strange for while now, which why were having this family meeting. Stitch and Demon finally knew why family meeting was called. To find out why Demon and Stitch(and Jumba) had been acting strange lately. However. Demon and Stitch didn't hesitate to what they said next. Demon and Stitch: Demon going to have baby. David chokes on glass of water. Nani goes crazy yelling every cus word from every lagauge she knows. Jumba just sat There. Pleakly fainted from shock. And Lilo caught Pleakly as he fell to the ground. Well...That went well. Demon just smiled at this and pulled him into a prolonged kiss.
THE END