 Palantiri 8/5/04 . chapter 1One, watch your spelling and grammar. Two, Alieta is Aelita. Three, Jermine is Jeremie. Four, why didn't you say that it was Ghost Channel in X.A.N.A.'s perpective? I thought you thought you made this up! Five, you somehow fixed the writing to not go across the entire page. Very strange. |