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Palantiri 8/5/04 . chapter 1
One, watch your spelling and grammar. Two, Alieta is Aelita. Three, Jermine is Jeremie. Four, why didn't you say that it was Ghost Channel in X.A.N.A.'s perpective? I thought you thought you made this up! Five, you somehow fixed the writing to not go across the entire page. Very strange.
Wind91Rider 8/5/04 . chapter 1
Very interesting way of doing "Ghost Channel." I like how you did it from X.A.N.A.'s eyes. DO another episode!
vampirehunterD-lover 8/5/04 . chapter 1
that was pretty good, just a little confusing. that was very creative to do his point of view on the ghost channel story.
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