A very good fic. Your writing skill has improved a lot since the first chapter, and Milfeulle and Vanilla are in character... though 'in character' is different for the anime, manga, and game... I look foward to seeing him interacting with the other Angels.

...hey I haven't review ever since my brother told me to get off his computer :/ but now I have my own hahhahahahahah!

Either way please update. Don't forget about this story =(

Oh yay you updated! (even though it was quite short -_-) I thought that you might had given up on this story! But thankfully you aren't.

And yes I do want to write stories but like you, I have school and such stuff. But that isn't the real reason. The real deal is that MY FREAKING COMPUTER KEEPS ON GETTING PROBLEMS! LIKE THIS YEAR, IT BROKE DOWN FOR THE 5 TIME!! Gr... I hate my computer. I right now even as I write this am forced to use another computer to do any thing.

I already have a story all set out, just can't work my computer so I can put it on fanfiction. Heck, I can't even update my profile.

I hope that you update soon because the more that I wait, the more I expect from people. ;)

...You really like pushing my patience don't you?

...PLEASE UPDATE SOON! DON'T YOU DARE KEEP ME HANGING LIKE THIS FOR OVER A YEAR LIKE LAST TIME!

Hi! I finally made an account on fanfiction now I can try to write some of my own story!

Also WHAT ARE YOU GUYS DOING HERE? STOP MAKING REFERENCES TO ME!

Oh yes please update! The girls and Jai are very... cute. There I said it! Now don't you dare black mail me because I said cute.

hmm, nice story, wonder if Chitose will show up later.

Hello this is the sister of Shadowzero and Utlimclaw!
Please make Milfeulle be the one will Jai!
UPDATE soon please or I will get a rope and hang you over a fire!

I am liking where you are goin with this story.
But here is a suggeston, have all the girls fall in love with Jai and fight over him! Well the ones who would fight anyway.
Either way, just update soon please!

Yes finally an update!
Thanks for actually responing to my review!
This is one of the best story I have read so far. The characters sounded like real people. Keep on writing for I think that this will turn out to be one of the greatest story ever written! However, who are you really pairing up? This is confusing beacuse the main character interacts with both girls. Oh well that makes me even more excited. Update soon please!

The story is real good hope you up date soon

WHY WON'T YOU UPDATE? DO SO I WON'T BE TORTURED!
I WAITED FOR OVER 1 YEAR SO DO SO OR I WILL BEHEAD YOU!

why so short!i realy like your story so update soon,pls.pls.pls!

heyy!! nice story! why not copntinue soon? =)

Hey, I like this story!
I can't wait for you to add some more.
Will add it to my faves

great... absolutely great... i don't know where to find other fanfics... but this fanfic is good !