WOO! SCRATCHY! I was so happy to see him ^^

HI MOLLY! ^^ (it's Vanessahedgecat) nice story I have been dying to read it ^^

THAT SUX SO BAD! U LYKE NEED 2 TAKE A BREAK. IT IS LYKE, EEW, TAKE SOME WRITING LESSONS OR SUMTHING!

quick question. i want to make a story in final fantasy adventure. there isn't one there. what do I do?

Wow, what a sweet story~! ^.^ I just finished reading all thirteen chapters today... and this is one of the funniest, and most well-plotted stories I've ever read~ n__n I love it~ ^v^ Hey... is there gonna' be any... 'romance' in this fic...? *nudgenudge*

Keep up the great work... can't wait for another chapter~! *v*

Hey,Awsome chapter(like always),I'm so sorry I couden't Review this sooner my computer crashed. ^_^; Well I'm going to tell you that I'm not going to use this account anymore,I'm only going to use it to review you're Awsome Chapters :D;I notice I'm not a very good writer,I don't know that much about writing ,so okay;but still keep it up,don't stop hope you become a great writer someday then I can come and say something like, HEY I KNOW HER I CHAT WITH HER ON THE INTERNET!!, X3;; hope we both achive our goals,someday...*hugs you to death* XD

Thanks for telling me about a c2. But I have a new question. Do you know what a huge 7ft long, golden sword is called? I don't I jakked it when I fought ANOTHER freaking demon and his freaking army of gold soldiers. U R lucky that you didn't accidently vow to defeat all the demons wreaking havoc. BYE! -POYOH! (and why does Illum like teh fishies?)

Up... date... ?

Great stuff! Giving Illum more personallity, then? Excellent work, that.

... I haven't looked at your deviantART account since that day... um, my bad?

Manga?! YOU'RE DOING IT?! Yees! Alright, keep things coming! I'll review and such!

~Daikonran Blackice

WE! You updated!! =D I like illum, so cute.
I wish I had a house that would make my breakfast! Hehehe that'd be fun, anyway I'm hungry^^
This story is great! Can't wait for the next chapter! Cya then

I Loved this chapter! Well.. Dream! ^_^ It's so cool with how the crane remembers them with how they act and such... It's kinda cute. ^_^
Anyways, I haven't emailed lately, I got writers block and lacking the skill to talk to people, I think I might be going into my old style of life, to lazy to exist. ^_^ Anyway, I'm glad you updated, I don't mind how long you take, I'm just happy as long as you keep it up!

Fantastical worthy of any movie story or comic book.

your my new favorite ^_^ i like inuyasha and sonic too! i like your story so far keep up the good work^_^

HEY! what up? Like I said before at DA Awsome Story :)

Oh no! I've run out of chapters to read!! Nu!
hehhe oh well, guess I'll have to wait for updates like everyone else ^^;
Good luck with idea's~

Hehe, I read this chapter yesterday but it wouldn't let me review. But now I get to =)
Damn, I don't think I'd like to be stuck in that dream world ><
I had a weird dream from this chapter too xD Everyone was being sexist and racist and I had no idea what was going on.
Anyway, Good luck with idea's!