I love your story ^_^ Its so creative- wonderful!!
I really cant wait for teh next part T_T Please please please update it soon, THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!
D:

Wonderful story though.
I'M DYING HERE!

T_T

I love your story ^_^ Its so creative- wonderful!!
I really cant wait for teh next part T_T Please please please update it soon, THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!
D:

Wonderful story though.
I'M DYING HERE!

T_T

HOLY CRAP!

anyway, i notice definite improvment in oyur writing. i especially like the detail! and, though it's always nice to have constant updates, i dont blame you for not having them. (hey, i can't handle them either. it's HARD writing on a deadline.) well, awesome chapter, and EVIL CLIFFHANGER! i hope you can update soon!^_^

O_O naraku shot kagome? not good, not good... how is inu going to react? we know how he'd react normaly, but this inu is slightly AU. sweeter and less clammed up.

oh... story chand=ge alot from book and movie. :D and miroku's the one who gave the chloths? i thoughty at first it was shippou-the-gargoyle.

I really like this story so far but I really wish that your chapters were a bit longer. Please continue to update. This is a great story and I'd like to see what will happen next soon.

aww cute

MUAHAHAHAHAHA! THE DETAIL! I LOVED IT! seriosuly, the detail and the description of the scenes was totally AWESOME! I SO HAPPY! my persistence paid off!!^_^ you actually wont believe how ecstatic about this i am!^^ ok, just keep the detail going (i wouldnt complain about more, but, this is still FABULOUS!) and i hope you update SOON!

This is a great story so far and I hope you update soon.

hi, eden-avalon. i wanted to make sure ur fics were still here, cause mine was deleted on acout of grammer. i'm not saying u have bad grammer, but no one's perfect, and mom sugjested that maybe they were getting strict about it. i guess someone reported me, but i wish i knew who, and why. heh. i already reviewed this chappy via IM.

good job. I only watched that movie once, but from what I see you are following quite well, all the charecter are comming into play nicly to. keep up the good work

kool story but if possible could u write longer chaters that whole story so far took me only 45 minutes to read lol if not that ok update soon

c'mon! gimme more details!! :P anyways... awesome stort, but DETAILS! PLEASE? just a few? like, the way the characters talk, whether they are angry, submissive, or something. or, if the looks on their faces tell anything of what their thinking? DESCRIPTION! PLEASE? i beg of thee!! well, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

poor kouga...SERVES HIM RIGHT. please update.

so the fight for kagome begins! uh... i've already said everything else. how fast will u get this one?