Nice story

BA telling Murdock that no one was gonna hurt him anymore was really sweet. Nice story

Aw, that was so cute! Well done! Poor Murdock, thinking he'd killed that guy! Nice going!

Good story, tho I don't agree with Murdock trying to commit suscide over that...or pretty much anything. I tend to think, even though he's insane, he still has a good head on his shoulders and he's very strong/stable, that few people realize. I think Hannibal is the only one that has any kind of idea of how strong/stable Murdock actually is.

But uhm, other than that, good story.

I can't believe you only got one review for such a great story. I loved it, a sweet little story about friendship etc. etc.

I'm no good at telling people where they went wrong in stories as who the heck am I to judge, so in my humble opinion it was great.

YES! Murdock on the lam with them the way it should have been. YES! I loved it all except for the lobotomy part. But I loved him being with them forever. Thanks again Hannurdock.

Sincerely,

FlightO'Fancy. :)