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UnwrittenTale
2009-09-25 . chapter 4
Wow... Somehow I should've expected that reaction from Knuckles, (oh so typical, I can see him doing it now.) But I gasped when I read it. This, along with Chapter 5, are my favorite parts of the story. I like how you incorporated Big (he's so cute!) & the Chaotix later on. It's a very good story overall! *Favs*
UnwrittenTale
2009-09-25 . chapter 5
Love this fic. I really do. Everyone is in character and their reactions to Knuckles' outburst are spot on. I love Shadow's reaction especially, it's very powerful and it gets to me. You don't come across fanfics like this too often. Great job!
PerlaNemesis
2008-09-18 . chapter 12
I love this story. I'm so glad that Tikal returned to life. She really deserves that. Also I like her and Shadow couple.
This story goes to my Favorite stories list.
Blitzer's demonic spirit
2008-05-25 . chapter 12
I really like it! I can be easy to please even if the characters are out of character a bit. But only by a bit though. ^^ I really like how you did the whole "Tikal gaining her life back" kind of thing.
MikomiTheKitsune
2005-08-23 . chapter 12
OMG! That was so good! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! :)
I like the couples you used!
*me talking to myself* WHY DIDN'T YOU THINK OF THAT?!!
*me responding to me talking to myself* ...Uhh...
Well, whatever. *continues chanting 'sequel'*
LeavesAndTheSky
2004-11-30 . chapter 12
It´s really good and I liked ALL the couples.Congratulations!!
cerberus fiveofthree
2004-09-11 . chapter 12
i'm no good with reviews so i'll just say that this was a great fic. and do i see a sequel on the horizon? a Chaos Emerald resurecction (sp?) perhaps? keep up the good work. - Cerberus15
Spike the Hedgechidna
2004-09-06 . chapter 12
AWESOME! AWESOME! ENCORE! ENCORE! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! This is a great story. Like above, I hope you write a sequel.
Ri2
2004-09-05 . chapter 11
Um, shouldn't destroying the Master Emerald make the island fall?
FirefliesAbright
2004-09-05 . chapter 12
hey this story was absolutly awesome! its really great! yur good at stories.. unlike me.. my stories suck! more sonic amy romance!

(3 things about me... im horse crazy, im horse crazy, and my stories suck)
Crescent-Wish-Forever
2004-09-05 . chapter 12
Aww yeah it was a nice ending!

every time i see this it keeps making me want to write a sonic fic XD

I might have to start one when i finish my FF one!

Can't wait to see more of your stuff!

More Shadow X Tikal woo!
Crescent-Wish-Forever
2004-09-05 . chapter 11
Woo an update

Yes Tikal and Shadow make a great couple!

one bad thing i noticed in this chappie was ''Said'' was said alot, instead of using said so much you could vary it with spoke, replied and so on

otherwise Fab!
Cap'n Chryssalid
2004-08-27 . chapter 10
This is quite good, though I would have liked things drawn out a little more. Maybe delve a little deeper into character's motivations, including that of the Alpha series robot... But no matter. A long storyline is not necessarily a better one. The Rouge-Knuckles related subplot was a nice addition to set against the broader storline, and other character-driven plot points would've been nice as well, but that would (typically) require beefier chapters to handle concurrent plotlines.
Gogehenks
2004-08-27 . chapter 6
Well that was...uhnn...something.

I'd say more but anything I say here will probably be repeated later on in the review, so it would be pointless.

So instead, I'll just start with the review.

First off, I'll start off with the good.

Spelling and grammar were seemingly decent. No major problems.

Characterization was okay. Some of the characters were similar to their video game counter-parts.

I like the fact that you decided to use Omega.

The story is fairly original.

And now for the bad.

Alrighty.

I’m sorry; this story is not very good.

I won’t say it sucked, because it didn’t. But it still wasn’t very good.

There was no flow to the things that happened. It all seemed as if the characters were being added at random but put at the end to make an attempt at a cliff hanger. This is bad because it left things kind of unorganized and made for an uninteresting read.

The plot, though original, was not particularly a great one and there weren’t any unexpected plot twists. Nothing part of not happened, and after reading the first chapter, I found that it was almost painfully easy to guess what would happen next.

There were a few parts in the first chapter where you missed some small words. If you look through, you’ll find them.

The story is very uninteresting because of how you wrote. You seem to lack a lot of skill at story-telling and things were like running nuances. It was all very predictable and that is not something you want in a story. Especially not if you want to have cliffhangers. About the only thing that was not predictable was the fact that you didn’t know who was being added in the next chapter.

I did not like the use of Tikal here, as she seems particularly out of place within this story line. She just doesn’t seem to fit. Knuckles never needed her before, so why would he need her now?

Now reading through this review, you may be thinking to yourself, “Why am I saying all of this yet I’m only on chapter six according to the review thing.
XKunoichiofthePaintbrushX
2004-08-27 . chapter 10
OH F**K NO! Man this was just getting good...update soon..
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