I loved that the team was there just in the nick of time to help Face out.

And Hannibal remembering a time when Face was hurt bad in nam and his strength help him then just like now.

Hm . . . I liked it but it seemed a bit too rushed in places. I think you could extend this and make it even longer and better than it is but that's up to you. It has great promise. I just have to wonder where in the series or after does it take place? The reason I ask is that if they were in the hospital for any length of time, Decker, Lynch, Fulbright and heck even Stockwell depending on where in the storyline you wanted this to fall - well one of them would have been closing in on the team if not actually already in the hospital. Which would complicate things further, I understand.

Also, if Face's car was flipped twice, well Face would have more wrong with him beside the bullet holes. And I think Hannibal would have told the doctors that he was also in a car wreck.

Also, if Face was shot both in his right shoulder and his left arm, I think he would have ended up dropping the gun inside the room after firing at the chopper and when first reading it, it took me a couple of times to figure out that there wasn't already a gunman in the room with Face. That he was only being fired upon by the chopper, so there should have been a showering of glass as well noted in the story somewhere.

Again, I like the story, I just think that you can improve it some. Plot has promise and it has me intrigued. Course, I love it anytime Face is in trouble. grins. Keep up the great work.

Loved it! Write more please?

wow that was like seriously the best one that i have ever read i cant wait to go through and read all of the others you have written i just hope i can get to read them all!